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7/17/20, 1:29 PM
This is a great first chapter. Great imagery and descriptions and a great job not forcing the reader to live through all of the narrator’s argument with his now ex. It’s also a huge tease :) I hope you have the next chapter almost ready to go. I want to read some wishes and mass enslavement :)
7/17/20, 12:55 PM
Every chaoter more and more mesmerizingly HOT! I'd sing in myself for that gym.....NOW
7/17/20, 12:44 PM
I also want to note how well you use sensory image in this chapter to evoke the harsh desert setting, the thrill of the Jeep safari, and the mysterious qualities of the black lamp. It adds drama, tension, and texture to a story that begins in lockdown Britain and continues in mirage-like Dubai.
7/17/20, 12:40 PM
The title of the story, a quotation of Majid's words to the narrator, is particularly intriguing. Likewise, this musing on the part of the narrator definitely caught my eye as possible foreshadowing: > "Whilst a small part of me mourned the lack of potential to have a night of wild sex with this handsome Arabian hunk, a rational part of me realised the low potential for this, even if he had been gay, due to my totally average appearance." I am particularly interested in the dynamic between the narrator and Majid, even more so with the involvement of the genie Jafar. This is a great setup for future chapters. Awesome work!
7/17/20, 12:18 PM
What an incredibly hot story. I love the way the ring makes the men want it more and more, and the suggestion that the love and desire it brings out in the men leaves a trace that gets stronger and stronger.
7/17/20, 12:17 PM
I loved it but again not much in reality change. Could have fun and torment someone by making dramatic changes. I like Max is aware but more could have been done with it.
7/17/20, 11:48 AM
> It was leg day today for me and I actually looked forward to it thinking of Strong and Prince > Believe me when I say there is no greater compliment I could get! In my own training, legs have been the challenge -- I'm 6'1", my legs are almost 2/3 of my height -- haha. It took me a while to realize that I was my own worst enemy -- my thought process was killing my leg development. I had to love them -- and that meant loving them where they were at that moment and growing them through love, too. As weird as that sounds, it totally worked. > Just need my gear > I'm on Hormone Replacement Therapy -- I'm happy to reveal. I think everyman over 40 ought to be. But as far as actual GEAR is concerned (there's a difference between steroids and hormones -- hormones are substances the body produces itself: testosterone, estrogen, insulin, vitamin D, growth hormone, etc), I haven't done an actual "cycle" in quite a few years. Sigh... I miss it.
7/17/20, 10:43 AM
Crossing my fingers Aiden is also brought into Pine's thrall at one point or another at least for a little bit. As always, enjoying the relationship between Pine and Mike. Definetly a rarity in this kind of writing.
7/17/20, 10:43 AM
are you okay?
7/17/20, 10:17 AM
>if you take the 4th bag is that the mind that makes all these fantastic stories would be gone > Yeah, but think of my video legacy!