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7/17/20, 12:40 PM
The title of the story, a quotation of Majid's words to the narrator, is particularly intriguing. Likewise, this musing on the part of the narrator definitely caught my eye as possible foreshadowing: > "Whilst a small part of me mourned the lack of potential to have a night of wild sex with this handsome Arabian hunk, a rational part of me realised the low potential for this, even if he had been gay, due to my totally average appearance." I am particularly interested in the dynamic between the narrator and Majid, even more so with the involvement of the genie Jafar. This is a great setup for future chapters. Awesome work!
7/17/20, 12:18 PM
What an incredibly hot story. I love the way the ring makes the men want it more and more, and the suggestion that the love and desire it brings out in the men leaves a trace that gets stronger and stronger.
7/17/20, 12:17 PM
I loved it but again not much in reality change. Could have fun and torment someone by making dramatic changes. I like Max is aware but more could have been done with it.
7/17/20, 11:48 AM
> It was leg day today for me and I actually looked forward to it thinking of Strong and Prince > Believe me when I say there is no greater compliment I could get! In my own training, legs have been the challenge -- I'm 6'1", my legs are almost 2/3 of my height -- haha. It took me a while to realize that I was my own worst enemy -- my thought process was killing my leg development. I had to love them -- and that meant loving them where they were at that moment and growing them through love, too. As weird as that sounds, it totally worked. > Just need my gear > I'm on Hormone Replacement Therapy -- I'm happy to reveal. I think everyman over 40 ought to be. But as far as actual GEAR is concerned (there's a difference between steroids and hormones -- hormones are substances the body produces itself: testosterone, estrogen, insulin, vitamin D, growth hormone, etc), I haven't done an actual "cycle" in quite a few years. Sigh... I miss it.
7/17/20, 10:43 AM
Crossing my fingers Aiden is also brought into Pine's thrall at one point or another at least for a little bit. As always, enjoying the relationship between Pine and Mike. Definetly a rarity in this kind of writing.
7/17/20, 10:43 AM
are you okay?
7/17/20, 10:17 AM
>if you take the 4th bag is that the mind that makes all these fantastic stories would be gone > Yeah, but think of my video legacy!
7/17/20, 10:05 AM
> I keep forgetting how fast this story is progressing. It’s only been a few days... > I think the entire 26 chapters take place over six days (with a "look ahead" at the end). Honestly, I didn't realize that till after I'd written it and did the math. It does move swiftly. > Hoping there’s a killer description of Rook’s new look next time we see him. > We will see Rook soon and you'll have to tell me if you think I did okay...
Anonymous
7/17/20, 8:05 AM
so hot great idea!
Anonymous
7/17/20, 7:49 AM
turning guys into emotionless zombies is always a turn on especially when its world domination