Recent Comments

Lusty Stallion
7/16/20, 10:53 PM
Looking forward to seeing where this goes man. Great start!
7/16/20, 10:20 PM
I'm really looking forward to seeing how Jafar and his "Master" conquer the world. World Domination stories are one of my biggest turn ons. And Jafar (especially in genie form) was one of my first crushes. I'm surprised I didn't write this. Are you me from the future?
Timet
7/16/20, 10:08 PM
Absman420, the big issue I see with if you take the 4th bag is that the mind that makes all these fantastic stories would be gone.
7/16/20, 10:01 PM
It was leg day today for me and I actually looked forward to it thinking of Strong and Prince. Just need my gear. Great story of Prince transforming and then returning to his old self. I love him cumming all over Strong and Strong taking it. And then the applause!!
7/16/20, 9:59 PM
I keep forgetting how fast this story is progressing. It's only been a few days, and already Strong is willingly giving in to being brainwashed. Hoping there's a killer description of Rook's new look next time we see him.
Anonymous
7/16/20, 7:56 PM
Well, I was planning to have a slice-of-life chapter from Noah's POV, and then who knows, so there will definitively be an in-depth description of what it looks like while under, and Noah probably would see others being "convinced", following Anîla around. Also, I'm more into positive stories, with relationship that build up. In my multi-chapter story, I had so much of a hard time writing assholes who wanted to simply control others, I changed main character several time till I had a much calmer lead. Also, I like drawings by somnefarious (they have a twitter, a deviantart, a tumblr,... you should find the drawings easily) and the naga!kenny thing from twitter (and tumblr), who tend to portray benevolent hypno-creatures. So I actually wanted to write a story like that since a while. And well, you write stories I like, so the fact that they are long is not as big of a problem as other writers... You would like to write stories more focused on romantic relationship? You wrote the path of "The grandfather's gift" that focused the more on a romantic harem rather than the sex, in my opinion. You can do really good stuff in this category!
Guapo
7/16/20, 7:12 PM
^ YES PLEASE! Why can't we just have a threesome? It would make everyone happy. Both men seem to make Roger happy and it would be sad to see him without two of his mindless, obedient, sexy lawyers.
7/16/20, 7:09 PM
AAAAHHHH! My interest is very piqued! I can't wait for the update, then. Hopefully it will come soon.
7/16/20, 7:07 PM
Awwww thanks :) And yes. I should learn to be more concise when writing, I try, I promise xD In my stories at the moment I have focused on a submission/humiliation relationship (it is certainly something I like 😅), but I would like to write a story like yours, more focused on more friendly and romantic or positive relationships. So I find a story like yours very attractive, in which naga is... a good guy even if it is not his main intention to be. Hahahaha. As you say, he ends up being a father figure without intending it, it's funny and tender x3 It's really fun to see the naga become socially incompetent, hahahaha, luckily he has hypnosis to make up for that. It really is a lot of fun to see that you include humor in the story, it's refreshing :3. Oh, by the way, a little suggestion, in my opinion it would be very enjoyable (if you consider it appropriate in future chapters) to add more description about the hypnotic process when Anîla hypnotizes his "pets"/"study subjects", perhaps it is a bit complicated to include in a type of journalistic narrative, but it is something that I certainly think would be very interesting to read.
7/16/20, 6:48 PM
Kyle Chu, the Anon Writer has already worked up another chapter, and let's just say you'll be very pleased.