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7/16/20, 9:59 PM
I keep forgetting how fast this story is progressing. It's only been a few days, and already Strong is willingly giving in to being brainwashed. Hoping there's a killer description of Rook's new look next time we see him.
Anonymous
7/16/20, 7:56 PM
Well, I was planning to have a slice-of-life chapter from Noah's POV, and then who knows, so there will definitively be an in-depth description of what it looks like while under, and Noah probably would see others being "convinced", following Anîla around. Also, I'm more into positive stories, with relationship that build up. In my multi-chapter story, I had so much of a hard time writing assholes who wanted to simply control others, I changed main character several time till I had a much calmer lead. Also, I like drawings by somnefarious (they have a twitter, a deviantart, a tumblr,... you should find the drawings easily) and the naga!kenny thing from twitter (and tumblr), who tend to portray benevolent hypno-creatures. So I actually wanted to write a story like that since a while. And well, you write stories I like, so the fact that they are long is not as big of a problem as other writers... You would like to write stories more focused on romantic relationship? You wrote the path of "The grandfather's gift" that focused the more on a romantic harem rather than the sex, in my opinion. You can do really good stuff in this category!
Guapo
7/16/20, 7:12 PM
^ YES PLEASE! Why can't we just have a threesome? It would make everyone happy. Both men seem to make Roger happy and it would be sad to see him without two of his mindless, obedient, sexy lawyers.
7/16/20, 7:09 PM
AAAAHHHH! My interest is very piqued! I can't wait for the update, then. Hopefully it will come soon.
7/16/20, 7:07 PM
Awwww thanks :) And yes. I should learn to be more concise when writing, I try, I promise xD In my stories at the moment I have focused on a submission/humiliation relationship (it is certainly something I like 😅), but I would like to write a story like yours, more focused on more friendly and romantic or positive relationships. So I find a story like yours very attractive, in which naga is... a good guy even if it is not his main intention to be. Hahahaha. As you say, he ends up being a father figure without intending it, it's funny and tender x3 It's really fun to see the naga become socially incompetent, hahahaha, luckily he has hypnosis to make up for that. It really is a lot of fun to see that you include humor in the story, it's refreshing :3. Oh, by the way, a little suggestion, in my opinion it would be very enjoyable (if you consider it appropriate in future chapters) to add more description about the hypnotic process when Anîla hypnotizes his "pets"/"study subjects", perhaps it is a bit complicated to include in a type of journalistic narrative, but it is something that I certainly think would be very interesting to read.
7/16/20, 6:48 PM
Kyle Chu, the Anon Writer has already worked up another chapter, and let's just say you'll be very pleased.
Apr 18, 2019
sepr23an
7/16/20, 6:06 PM
So hott!! this sentence literally make me cum so hard: As one last convulsion and flex of M’tonn’s muscle signaled the end of his individuality, the arch of his strong back pushed his pecs and abs forward even more. It's really showed that M'tonn so being dominated by the hive. Please write the bext story!!!!!! I really want to know how the hive corrupted the other 2 hunks and maybe other hot guy!!
7/16/20, 5:54 PM
Such a great story. One I always come back to. WRITE MORE please!!
Anonymous
7/16/20, 5:27 PM
I never really enjoy the destructive stories where a handsome, built bodybuilder gets his body ruined by some jealous a-hole. The writing was well done, but I feel bad for Brad.
7/16/20, 4:55 PM
I like it and would like it to be continued also I think you made a good story that could go in a lot of good directions if carefully plan it and pace yourself.