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Apr 18, 2019
sepr23an
7/16/20, 6:06 PM
So hott!! this sentence literally make me cum so hard: As one last convulsion and flex of M’tonn’s muscle signaled the end of his individuality, the arch of his strong back pushed his pecs and abs forward even more. It's really showed that M'tonn so being dominated by the hive. Please write the bext story!!!!!! I really want to know how the hive corrupted the other 2 hunks and maybe other hot guy!!
7/16/20, 5:54 PM
Such a great story. One I always come back to. WRITE MORE please!!
Anonymous
7/16/20, 5:27 PM
I never really enjoy the destructive stories where a handsome, built bodybuilder gets his body ruined by some jealous a-hole. The writing was well done, but I feel bad for Brad.
7/16/20, 4:55 PM
I like it and would like it to be continued also I think you made a good story that could go in a lot of good directions if carefully plan it and pace yourself.
7/16/20, 4:20 PM
This was great, although the headset part was always my favorite in the series. I wish that wasn't cut out. Also, as far as I can remember, we haven't featured any man who's jockey membrane has fully reached the brain. I'm kinda curious if hypnothrill or the anon writer could write up a sequel that explores how a man really changes once the jockey's takeover is complete. Anyway, the jockey series is one of my all time favorites and I'm happy it got a continuation!
7/16/20, 3:33 PM
Very hot scenes, but I'm not sure if I totally understand the twist at the end, which seems to contradict a lot of Captain Drew's prior actions.
Jul 15, 2020
Anonymous
7/16/20, 2:32 PM
I'm still hard!!!!!
Jul 9, 2019
Steve
7/16/20, 2:15 PM
excellent writing and good transformation.
7/16/20, 2:04 PM
OMG it's the hottest stories series i've ever read!
7/16/20, 1:35 PM
ive re-read this story 4 times today. I want to be Peter so much in this story.