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7/16/20, 7:09 PM
AAAAHHHH! My interest is very piqued! I can't wait for the update, then. Hopefully it will come soon.
7/16/20, 7:07 PM
Awwww thanks :) And yes. I should learn to be more concise when writing, I try, I promise xD In my stories at the moment I have focused on a submission/humiliation relationship (it is certainly something I like 😅), but I would like to write a story like yours, more focused on more friendly and romantic or positive relationships. So I find a story like yours very attractive, in which naga is... a good guy even if it is not his main intention to be. Hahahaha. As you say, he ends up being a father figure without intending it, it's funny and tender x3 It's really fun to see the naga become socially incompetent, hahahaha, luckily he has hypnosis to make up for that. It really is a lot of fun to see that you include humor in the story, it's refreshing :3. Oh, by the way, a little suggestion, in my opinion it would be very enjoyable (if you consider it appropriate in future chapters) to add more description about the hypnotic process when Anîla hypnotizes his "pets"/"study subjects", perhaps it is a bit complicated to include in a type of journalistic narrative, but it is something that I certainly think would be very interesting to read.
7/16/20, 6:48 PM
Kyle Chu, the Anon Writer has already worked up another chapter, and let's just say you'll be very pleased.
Apr 18, 2019
sepr23an
7/16/20, 6:06 PM
So hott!! this sentence literally make me cum so hard: As one last convulsion and flex of M’tonn’s muscle signaled the end of his individuality, the arch of his strong back pushed his pecs and abs forward even more. It's really showed that M'tonn so being dominated by the hive. Please write the bext story!!!!!! I really want to know how the hive corrupted the other 2 hunks and maybe other hot guy!!
7/16/20, 5:54 PM
Such a great story. One I always come back to. WRITE MORE please!!
Anonymous
7/16/20, 5:27 PM
I never really enjoy the destructive stories where a handsome, built bodybuilder gets his body ruined by some jealous a-hole. The writing was well done, but I feel bad for Brad.
7/16/20, 4:55 PM
I like it and would like it to be continued also I think you made a good story that could go in a lot of good directions if carefully plan it and pace yourself.
7/16/20, 4:20 PM
This was great, although the headset part was always my favorite in the series. I wish that wasn't cut out. Also, as far as I can remember, we haven't featured any man who's jockey membrane has fully reached the brain. I'm kinda curious if hypnothrill or the anon writer could write up a sequel that explores how a man really changes once the jockey's takeover is complete. Anyway, the jockey series is one of my all time favorites and I'm happy it got a continuation!
7/16/20, 3:33 PM
Very hot scenes, but I'm not sure if I totally understand the twist at the end, which seems to contradict a lot of Captain Drew's prior actions.
Jul 15, 2020
Anonymous
7/16/20, 2:32 PM
I'm still hard!!!!!