Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/16/20, 12:30 PM
I am so glad you are back with this story! looking forward to seeing where it goes.
7/16/20, 12:14 PM
I LOVE THIS SERIES! This is an excellent addition, anonymous author -- well done!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/16/20, 11:47 AM
I submit to a pair of royal blue blue jockeys please.
Anonymous
7/16/20, 11:30 AM
Sexy. Well written and great story. Hope there is more
7/16/20, 11:25 AM
welcome back
7/16/20, 11:17 AM
I'd suggest remove the final couple of paragraphs and write all those extra chapters... you do have an entire world takeover to write potentially. I hope you saved the directors cut of this as I'm sure it will be popular. editing is far worse than writing, so many loose threads to unpick. I rarely do werewolves as there are many many stories out there... this one is noteworthy.
7/16/20, 11:10 AM
@RotherhamMan love the idea
7/16/20, 11:09 AM
love it! esp knowing that it's his brother unknowingly using him. would love to see it sold more and the lips too. plz write more on this
Anonymous
7/16/20, 9:36 AM
Thanks! I really like your Kaa stories! They tend to be a bit long, but it's hot and the weird feelings Kaa has for his mancub are really nice to read about! Also, I try to put humor in my stories, mostly trough absurd reactions and characters pointing out the non-sense happening around them. In this story, it was only the former, as I decided that a naga wouldn't be as competent at understanding what humans do than most writers make them to be. So I decided he would become a dad without meaning it. If I make a sequel to this story after the challenge is over, I'll describe more situation that show Anîla as socially inept. I like writing this well-meaning, oblivious father figure.
7/16/20, 9:05 AM
really liked the premise,just a bit short