Recent Comments

7/16/20, 5:19 AM
For a reality changing pen not much reality was altered for interesting stuff, as Ryan just used it to become a dom and have slaves.
Anonymous
7/16/20, 4:17 AM
I can't wait to see what other kinds of transformations the jocks get into. It might be hot if there was some overall shrinking or size play: losing height, but keeping the muscle and cock size, or transferring muscle or size from one jock to the other. I really liked the cock shrinking in the last two chapters. Overall a really fun story so far, so please continue!
7/16/20, 3:31 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! Keep it up.
Author Of This Story
7/16/20, 2:25 AM
Thanks everyone for the kind and encouraging comments! I'm happy you liked it, and I'm happy to hear from you @nycboot. I must confess that I was hoping you might notice this story and comment. ;) And if you liked it, all the better! As for your guess, I'm afraid time will have to tell!
7/16/20, 1:28 AM
Hey, I trust you man. This is a fun ride, and you're leading us along a steamy path.
Anonymous
7/16/20, 1:27 AM
love a good video game induction story!
7/16/20, 1:25 AM
I cant wait for the next chapter and more changes! Love the cock shrinking aspects! AWESOME!
Jul 15, 2020
7/16/20, 1:13 AM
Oh damn, always excited whenever I see a Pizza Boy update from you. Brad and Chad are one sexy fuckers and I loved Brad's vain and narcissistic personality and how he got obsessed with Chad. The frat scene was also very hot and I like how they captured the nerdy looking guy. Really great job and I can't wait for more updates!
7/16/20, 1:12 AM
One of the best stories I've ever read. Hope there's more
7/16/20, 12:44 AM
So hot! Reminds me of something Nicky Noxville would write