Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/15/20, 2:03 PM
Really needs editing as sentences run on or stop abruptly with periods, commas and semi-colons mixed up. First paragraph makes no sense... There might be a great story in there but my brain hurt trying to get through the first lines and gave up.
Anonymous
7/15/20, 1:23 PM
This was so hot!!! I'm really looking forward to the next one. Maybe the brother gives the toy to their dad? Please make more
7/15/20, 1:12 PM
Since it was originally planned for the contest, it was just gonna be a one-off. But now... I can see it going either way, with more stories of Alan and Brian or the book falling into another person's hands. Thanks for reading!
Jul 15, 2020
giveintothemusk
7/15/20, 12:55 PM
Mmmmm loved this!
Ginge
7/15/20, 12:06 PM
my pleasure! surprised also I'm the first comment on this chapter - fantastic sex scene and can't wait to read more!
7/15/20, 11:39 AM
>the best/hottest part of the series so far! > THANK YOU! 700 readers (so far) and yours is the first comment on what I consider to be one of the best sex scenes I've ever written! There's more cumming in the future, of course, but this chapter has always been a favorite of mine. Thank you for saying something -- it does an old heart good.
7/15/20, 11:20 AM
absolutely fantastic story got me hard instantaneously. I hope that you continue writing because you are good at it.
Anonymous
7/15/20, 11:12 AM
please write more !
Ginge
7/15/20, 11:08 AM
the best/hottest part of the series so far!
7/15/20, 10:43 AM
A very well-written story - well done and thank you for writing it.