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Anonymous
7/15/20, 11:12 AM
please write more !
Ginge
7/15/20, 11:08 AM
the best/hottest part of the series so far!
7/15/20, 10:43 AM
A very well-written story - well done and thank you for writing it.
Anonymous
7/15/20, 10:41 AM
Love to see more stories like this!
7/15/20, 10:11 AM
Great story, but quite unbelievable I think. For bright young people like that, they must have pondered a lot on ethics, most likely laying all the ground rules as to whom when and how experiments and testing are conducted. Either that, or they have no regards for ethics and enslave Hunter in their first meeting within minutes. You might say they have no business or real-world experience, but most real nerds read a lot of sci fi and can smell bad plots miles away. Just my 2 cents. Still great story and definitely worth reading though!
7/15/20, 10:03 AM
I was engrossed. Terrific, spectacular, show-stopping, etc... The transformation, dialogue, concept, description, writing style - all of it just great. I pray to the Satyr gods there will be a follow up of some form or another, but even as a stand alone piece it will rank as one of my all-time faves
7/15/20, 10:01 AM
>Every time Strong meets someone new, I think that guy’s gonna become central to the story. With Woody, I feel like we finally met the guy. > Well, at least you've met the entire cast. I promise this: there are no "throw-away" characters in this story -- everybody has an arc. As you will see in the next few chapters, things are about to get very intense for Strong and the supporting cast.
Anonymous
7/15/20, 9:49 AM
This was amazing!
7/15/20, 9:47 AM
The title of this story makes me think you're leaving the door open for a sequel or anthology series. Nice story, i enjoyed it. Though when i read the transformation would last until satisfied, i kinda expected him to grow any time he felt small or ignored.
7/15/20, 9:34 AM
Yay! *kazoo noises*