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7/14/20, 4:44 PM
Wow. That was very hot and really enjoyable. Great job on a story you say you didn’t have a plan in mind on. Kept me interested throughout. I personally love first person POV, because it’s so immediate, and thought you used it extremely smartly in this story.
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7/14/20, 3:43 PM
SO HOT !!!
7/14/20, 3:03 PM
soo love how this is turning out, I did not see this coming. can't wait for the next chapter.
7/14/20, 2:46 PM
Didn't see the HR guy being behind this, a nice twist. Please continue
7/14/20, 1:56 PM
OKAY,I did not see Henry being the mastermind behind all this coming,but I LOVE it also,I like how he gets Dustin by playing with his ego as an alpha male can't wait for the next chapter
7/14/20, 1:56 PM
Great storytelling! The story got hotter and hotter, which made he get harder & harder! Can't wait for more visitors to the Satyr's bar!
7/14/20, 1:14 PM
So hot and tasty...you have my mouth watering. Great storytelling and very detailed..Yes, who's at the door and do they have a hypnotizing dick, as well?
7/14/20, 12:59 PM
Great second story! Hot factor is up and growing. Nice twist..gotta continue with this. I'm drooling for more.
7/14/20, 12:51 PM
I get real hard reading hypnotized stories and this one got me there. Never read one about a "hypnotizing cock." Keep going and growing!
7/14/20, 12:44 PM
I actually love this series so far. I hope to see the frat daddy reinstate the coach as a "proper" coach. Other than that, I had another idea if you would like. Essentially, each of these boys are in a program of study at the campus. I was thinking that since the boys of this frat are learning to become real men, the head faculty of each of their programs could also teach them respect and discipline by being appointed as the boys' masters for their duration of their program. This power over the boys is not to be advised, but to teach them how to become Men in their field of study, whether is be politics, or law enforcement, or a science of some kind. And at the end of every year or just before graduation the boy becomes the master of their appointed professor, not as a reward, but as a test to see what they've learned and will be graded by their professor. The idea is a little complex, following around a lot of people, but you can narrow that down by having multiple boys belonging to one faculty professor because im sure more than one boy is in the same program with one another. I just thought I'd contribute. im not very good at writing myself, but i offer ideas when i can.