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Anonymous
7/14/20, 2:08 AM
lol no i don't think frank was always nonna personally but lol at that comment. when frank does his little double take that's when I pictured grandma getting the vibe and needing to act... she's got frank's bugged.
7/14/20, 2:02 AM
Oh dang, they finally did the deed! I'm kinda curious where this is going to go now. Will the next arc be about their graduation? Also I thought of wolfsbane as well when I first read this series since I'm familiar with werewolf lore from The Vampire Diaries. I wonder if someone will end up using that to hurt Dave in the future? I hope not, but I feel like the flower was introduced for a reason...
jamiemboy
7/14/20, 1:59 AM
Really loved the Moooocow Brotalk in this chapter!!!
7/14/20, 1:39 AM
What a great beginning! I look forward to more.
7/14/20, 1:17 AM
Each rep becoming easier. That's one hell of an image.
7/14/20, 1:11 AM
A promising start, i will be looking out for more!
Dante
7/14/20, 1:02 AM
First off, let me just congratulate JoSmith for a job well done on this chapter. As for the million dollar question of who should Roger end up with, I gotta go with Mikey here. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Phil and Roger's daddy/son shenanigans and I'm all up for the forbidden sex but I'm sorry to say that not only did Phil and Roger's relationship started in cheating, lies and deceit, but it's also highly inappropriate. Roger's been with Stacie for like three years I think (its been a while since I read the other chapters) and then he dates her dad? That will make her his daughter basically and I can't imagine how her relatives would take it. I'm not saying that older and younger relationships don't work, it's just this particular one don't match up. Roger has too much history with Stacie for this to work. It's too messy. At best, just make Phil a fuck buddy on the DL, but I don't think the two of them should date. It's not ideal and its not healthy.
7/14/20, 12:30 AM
I honestly love all your stories. If you decide you want to pursue a more romantic story line in the future with a later project, I recommend reading "The Coffee Shop" for inspiration if you need it. As for this story, I vote for ROGER and PHIL. They have way too much chemistry and with Roger becoming single and Phil wanting out of his predicament, it seems like fate in a way.
7/14/20, 12:13 AM
Such a beautifully written - and hot - story! I enjoyed it immensely.
7/13/20, 11:44 PM
Wow, I loved it, specially since it has old men getting mind controlled and with feet. You are hitting the right buttons here!