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vicbiguy3
7/13/20, 9:42 PM
Holy fuck! This is unbelieveable! Cant wait for Blue Fountains! I too hope the cops get to fuck each other, and that the stoners, get into fucking the cops and each other!
Chiguy
7/13/20, 8:55 PM
Chapter 8 was the BEST chapter of this series. I hope we get something similar to that and Roger's daddy slave returns. We can't just push Phil to the side like that. Btw I'm really looking forward to "personal toy"! You're seriously the best writer on here.
vicbiguy
7/13/20, 8:32 PM
I too am an enthusiast of stories of the Fae, and can compare this to L. Sprague De Camp's magical and hilarious novels. However this one has better sex than De Camp. Please do give us more adventures of Chance and Fairchilde, ( who I suspect is indeed a changeling). And thanks for a really good read!
7/13/20, 7:43 PM
I look forward to hearing more. As Chris succumbs....
7/13/20, 7:39 PM
Do what you will. I have enjoyed your ride and want to see how you intended it to end
7/13/20, 7:31 PM
Lately, I've found that a lot of the comments on this site are unduly negative. I liked the story a lot. It has a claustrophobic, nightmarish quality about it. One line in particular stands out as excellent writing: "The ropes of cum sliding down into the drain were the streamers flying off on a cruise ship as he was finally arriving home." Keep on writing and don't listen to negative criticism unless it comes with positive advice.
7/13/20, 7:06 PM
This chapter killed me, killed me dead! It was soooo good. Loved, LOVED, the rimming and then the fucking. Loved our cop pov, so glad he rimmed and fucked. I'm hoping that our dom cock gets to have the other cop as his subby bottom boy. Hehe
7/13/20, 6:59 PM
thank you Martin.
Martin
7/13/20, 6:56 PM
Hi, in your own interest, please add way more paragraph breaks. Usually, a new paragraph is started for each new direct speech. The way it is, your walls of texts are really hard to read. Please edit your text and I'll approve it once its formatting is improved. Thanks!
Anonymous
7/13/20, 6:38 PM
Only thing missing was a last scene from Chance's POV, once he returned to the mortal realm