Recent Comments

7/13/20, 7:31 PM
Lately, I've found that a lot of the comments on this site are unduly negative. I liked the story a lot. It has a claustrophobic, nightmarish quality about it. One line in particular stands out as excellent writing: "The ropes of cum sliding down into the drain were the streamers flying off on a cruise ship as he was finally arriving home." Keep on writing and don't listen to negative criticism unless it comes with positive advice.
7/13/20, 7:06 PM
This chapter killed me, killed me dead! It was soooo good. Loved, LOVED, the rimming and then the fucking. Loved our cop pov, so glad he rimmed and fucked. I'm hoping that our dom cock gets to have the other cop as his subby bottom boy. Hehe
7/13/20, 6:59 PM
thank you Martin.
Martin
7/13/20, 6:56 PM
Hi, in your own interest, please add way more paragraph breaks. Usually, a new paragraph is started for each new direct speech. The way it is, your walls of texts are really hard to read. Please edit your text and I'll approve it once its formatting is improved. Thanks!
Anonymous
7/13/20, 6:38 PM
Only thing missing was a last scene from Chance's POV, once he returned to the mortal realm
Somnus
7/13/20, 5:53 PM
I'm loving the story. Keep up the good work :)
7/13/20, 5:35 PM
Wonderful transformations!
Anonymous
7/13/20, 5:20 PM
Great story and well written. Please continue!
Retcon
7/13/20, 5:15 PM
I agree with the sentiment that Phil is not really boyfriend material, so please drop the whole fairytale ending of them marrying each other or leaving his wife to be with him. I'm perfectly fine with him being Roger's daddy slave though so please let Phil come back to him and beg him to put him under and give him a mind numbing fuck. As for Mikey, I'm starting to come around with the idea that he's better being Roger's partner in crime rather than a mindless houseboy/personal butler
7/13/20, 5:02 PM
The curse seems almost unstoppable at this point. Marcus is losing control of himself and those around him aren't doing much better. It seems as though individuals such as Kevin serve only as catalysts to bring about the full effects of the curse. I do wonder what Marcus will look like at the end of it all. I'm even more interested in how he feels about his new, cursed life. I really enjoyed the use of dramatic tension in this chapter, which builds slowly and reaches its climax with Kevin's climax (no pun intended). The device of Marcus using a pen and then a highlighter to attempt self-control is effective at communicating the tenuous grip that he has on his mental and physical state. It is also laugh out loud funny! I am curious about the text messages that Marcus received, particularly the mysterious and slightly threatening picture message. Who could it be from and what could it mean? I suppose we may find out in future chapters! The narrative control in this multi-part story is fantastic and I love experiencing the story arc as it develops!