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7/13/20, 5:02 PM
The curse seems almost unstoppable at this point. Marcus is losing control of himself and those around him aren't doing much better. It seems as though individuals such as Kevin serve only as catalysts to bring about the full effects of the curse. I do wonder what Marcus will look like at the end of it all. I'm even more interested in how he feels about his new, cursed life. I really enjoyed the use of dramatic tension in this chapter, which builds slowly and reaches its climax with Kevin's climax (no pun intended). The device of Marcus using a pen and then a highlighter to attempt self-control is effective at communicating the tenuous grip that he has on his mental and physical state. It is also laugh out loud funny! I am curious about the text messages that Marcus received, particularly the mysterious and slightly threatening picture message. Who could it be from and what could it mean? I suppose we may find out in future chapters! The narrative control in this multi-part story is fantastic and I love experiencing the story arc as it develops!
7/13/20, 4:45 PM
Please continue!
7/13/20, 3:07 PM
Great story as always and i think the big twist was Hunter enslaving Roger and Peter. Would have love to see a bit more of Gabe just cause seeing him enslaved would be hot. But as always amazing work.
7/13/20, 3:02 PM
I absolutely loved this! Nerdy, funny, well plotted, and hot as hell. (I’m just jealous that nothing like this ever happened to me when I went to outdoor Shakespeare performances.) I hope we see a lot more from you!
7/13/20, 1:15 PM
this was hot as hell and sooooooooo well written! i'm a shakespearean actor and midsummer is my fave play and Puck is my favorite character and this was amazing! i would love to read more about Chance and Fairchilde's adventures with the fae, or about any other men who have stumbled into Puck's service!!
7/13/20, 12:55 PM
This is a really interesting concept! You write dialogue very well, and I loved the idea of the story. The descriptions were also really engaging and hot. There did seem to be some naming confusion and the story would benefit from organizing your paragraphs and paragraph breaks a bit more. Lastly, I sort of wish that we had seen the characters react to and live with each change a bit more -- the pacing was a bit fast for me. Great work!
7/13/20, 11:40 AM
Your back!!! And I'm super interested in what is happening! Honestly, I'm okay with you taking your time, even if I do admit a year is a bit long... Actually, I'm more interested in the four other brothers than the dad! I wonder what they act like.
7/13/20, 11:40 AM
will we see more?
7/13/20, 11:21 AM
> I think this is one of the best series you have written. > Thank you! What I'd intended to be a Summer Serial ended up being an entire novel. Its length even intimidates ME at times -- I hadn't read it in a few years and when I was debating putting it on GSS, I went through it critically. I'm pleased to say that I still like it -- there's a few moments I'd play with (mostly language, not plot), but on the whole, I think it's strong. (Pardon the pun.) We're not even halfway through, yet -- WAY more to cum!
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7/13/20, 10:25 AM
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