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Sweet Love
7/12/20, 7:52 AM
My vote goes for Mikey. I just feel like Phil and Roger ending up together feels too similar to Butch and Aaron on The Chip and so, it would be a nice change if the young protagonist didn't end up with the dad for once. That's just my opinion though. It's not the end of the world if Phil still ends up with Roger but this new pairing just feels more fresh and exciting compared to the daddy domination romance.
Anonymous
7/12/20, 7:18 AM
Definitely Phil! This series called stacy's dad, not stacy's dad's "coming out of nowhere and used to be annoying but now better" colleague. But I don't think we have the right to interfere the ending of a story, it's not like at the middle of a story and you adding some popular scene into the original story. So it may be the best if you don't re-write at all. PS: I do love Mikey as well, he's just not the reason I started to read this story, sorry if I hurt someone who loves Mikey's feeling.
boi98229
7/12/20, 7:12 AM
Well, i have to say that i saw that one coming. It was the obvious next step for Julian to create a very powerful blackmail control over Tom. i can see that for the story's sake, it was a logical next step, but personally i don't like using blackmail as the tools for M/s control, even in a story and even when the boy has been very sexually active and freely made the choice to be involved. That said if i overlook those elements, the story is still very hot. Julian definitely has the personality and imagination to be a Master. For me it is Julian that makes this story undeniably hot! i'm pretty hooked on Julian at this point, so sincerely hope you have more chapters in the works -- more, please, Sir.
boi98229
7/12/20, 6:47 AM
Okay, okay, i am definitely coming around to your way of thinking, and honestly i feel pretty mindfucked because at this point i can't imaging having anything negative to say about this incredibly hot story. Thanks for your erotic imagination, great writing, and sharing them with the rest of us. Damned if i'm not going to go to bed tonight thinking about getting spit-roasted by the Collelo twins, Julian's devil smirk, and that incessant feeling that i need to call Julian or LestatD, my Master. Good job! You're definitely a Master.
Masters boy
7/12/20, 6:44 AM
I'm bisexual but after reading these I think I'm Gay and want cock more than ever I've a fresh tight ass need a Master
Anonymous
7/12/20, 6:32 AM
oh, don't change for us, but if ever...i'm a sucker for a threeway relationship but with Phil still being married and whatever, i don't think it's so easily resolved in just ONE chapter but I'll be sinking with my real ship of Phil and Roger if it comes to that. i'd still love the ending regardless because this story is immaculate!
boi98229
7/12/20, 6:25 AM
i love the idea of submitting to slave hypnosis and being totally dominated like this, so this hits a lot of my hot buttons. i am particularly aroused when someone younger manages to dominate someone older. However, i am really confused as to how Julian managed to get this level of hypnotic control over Tom. When and how did he manage to program Tom with hypnotic triggers? Tom's initially falling asleep during the workout didn't make sense to me. There was no mention of any prior hypnosis. i understand that Julian has a hot young man's body with a commanding demeanor, a big cock, mind-bending pheromones, and a bottle of poppers, but according to the story Tom is straight and has a good and developing relationship with Julian's mother. i don't see how this would realistically happen. i know it's just a story, and as readers we can choose to just overlook a few loose ends. That's what allows me to enjoy the rest of the story so much. i just wish the missing pieces had been filled in. For me that would have made for a fantastic story i would have bookmarked and read over and over. (Actually i may do that yet, but will wait and see how things develop further.)
Teddy Boi
7/12/20, 5:17 AM
Can we vote for Roger being in a threeway relationship? No? Then, in that case, I want him with our boy Mikey! Dude really stepped up this chapter, and Phil is being a douche for giving Roger radio silence. At least talk to the guy in person and tell whats on your mind. Mikey is like the dream boyfriend and he would do well with Roger.
Anonymous
7/12/20, 4:17 AM
Looking forward to seeing the sequels and more being posted here!!
Aaronnn
7/12/20, 3:30 AM
I think you should re-write your ending. I honestly can't praise you enough on how well you did the previous chapter. Roger's character growth was amazing when he decided to do the mature thing and released Phil from his mind control. He went from horny, college dude only thinking with his cock into an mature, young man who builds a genuine, heart-warming friendship/romance with Mikey. I know you probably envisioned this story to end with Roger and Phil together, but you know, your stories evolve sometimes and I think its a good idea to step away from the road you originally planned and explore other unexpected possibilities. Thats how you create memorable and extraordinary classic stories.