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boi98229
7/11/20, 11:50 PM
Yes, there were a number of errors and one or two where the sentence made no sense. In my mind the other significant flaw is the length of the story, but i only complain about the length because i think the basic plot is very arousing, and i would like to have read more. i particularly would have liked more description of the process of indoctrination, how the drone experienced the process, and what is the intention of the new owner.
Aug 1, 2019
Guy
7/11/20, 11:35 PM
super hot dude. i mean big tobacco is bad and all that, but still, your writing got me to where i needed to be.
DaddyLover
7/11/20, 9:25 PM
Oof, this is tough. I was a pretty avid fan of Phil and Roger but I do agree that Mike has become easily THE BEST character in this series. Not gonna lie, I melted like putty when he insisted to take care of Roger and helped him out during his break up phase. And yes, I also think their relationship is much healthier and sweet than his mindless, lust-filled, high schoolish romps with Phil. And yeah, if Phil has ghosted Roger for almost a year, then I say its best that they just go their separate ways. Maybe he can join on an occasional three way with Mike if he ever gets over himself
7/11/20, 8:25 PM
Kinda wish the story continued more past the possession, or even the spirits merging. The ghost mentioned him never getting the experience to explore his sexuality, which when mentioned earlier in the story I figured would be extrapolated after the possession with him using the host to hook up. Shower scene was kinda hot, would be hotter with more exploration of the body. Also kinda wish it explored how Tom actually possessed the body instead of it being said that it happens. Not bad tho.
DaddyFan
7/11/20, 8:16 PM
Screw what the above people said, Roger and Phil deserves to be together! I don't care if he has to re-trigger his daddy to love him again but they most DEFINITELY need to be together. No other ending is acceptable or I'm going to throw a riot!
Shadow Reader
7/11/20, 6:32 PM
When Mike was first introduced in the story, I never thought I would like him this much considering he was such a nasty, little prick. What a huge turnaround I had now, I can't believe I actually ship him with Roger over Phil now! The two of them just makes more sense, Mike does not have the baggage that Phil has and at least Roger is not "the other mistress" with Mike. I don't know if you truly listen to comments or if mine would even make a difference, but please, PLEASE let this happen!!!!! Mike x Roger is a far healthier couple than Phil x Roger
7/11/20, 6:14 PM
Wow,that was a short one,but I can't wait to see the next one. Things are about to get interesting
MikeShipperHere
7/11/20, 4:59 PM
Maybe after Roger comes back from Spain, let him do the same thing that he did to Stacy's dad and let Mike remember their moments and experiences too. Maybe he ends up actually liking his changes more because he feels like a better person for it and enjoys a more meaningful relationship with him unlike the ones he had during his asshole days. Maybe he loves the hypno-enhanced sex too despite being turned gay. I think doing this ending would be a neat parallel where Roger's infatuation for Phil was more about his young, bi-curious college phase while his romance with Mike ends up being a mature, genuine friendship turning into something more meaningful because they actually ended up getting to know each other whereas his and Phils relationship was more primal and sex driven. So I think its only fitting that he moves on from Phil and be with Mike in the adult phase of his life. I don't know, just my opinion. I'm curious to see if others agree with me or if I'll get crucified by the Phil-shippers :p
7/11/20, 4:08 PM
You've left the door open to continue this story, you've gotten some tips and ideas to do that. I like the story, but it needed more development. I look forward to seeing more of your work. I think you have some good concepts to explore.
7/11/20, 2:19 PM
This has become one of my favorite series and your writing is awesome. Can't wait to see how this ends.