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1/1/25, 12:02 AM
God damn. You are a legend

1/1/25, 1:33 AM
@[Ignaciodelsol](/user/show/10004978) Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
12/30/24, 7:58 AM
Love this, especially knowing who this is based on. Was a fun read!

Anonymous
12/31/24, 11:39 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) who is it based on?
mic
12/31/24, 10:30 PM
fucking hot story, one of the best, more jock loser blowjob storys, and confiscate their underwear and sell it, lock losers in chasity, the winers should more enslave them, and more foto film, but great ideas man, love it, please more
Anonymous
12/31/24, 10:18 PM
This was great! Would love to read more about Alex’s changes :)
mic
12/31/24, 10:10 PM
fucking hot, trick more guys, and more of jake, lock his cock in chasity cage so he stays full of cum for your show
12/31/24, 5:11 PM
So Joe is now, or for the time being, a puddle of sentient silver? When the villains' planned on making them a pair, did they intend to have Joe's crawler fuse with Lee? And if it is to become Hank's mission to remove all superpowers, I'd say Hank is doing the opposite. It seems he just upped Lee's power and now Joe is has become a liquid metal that will likely be able to change shape to whatever he needs. Couldn't have made your mission any harder out the gate. Though still, that was a massive twist I did not see coming. You have a really good knack for throwing these curve balls. Though this still leaves Hank a bit ambiguous to his end goals. Or largely how he is going to achieve them. Personally, I suspect he will either betray or reprogram H-3. I doubt they will be on the same side for too long. They have different viewpoints and methods that don't mesh. But I would even say Hank is being too dismissive of the potential use of the heroes they already have. He view of them is clouding his judgment. He was quite eager to have Henry and especially Nick in the past. And he was all for upping his drones with powers when he was in command. But no hints or teasers for what's next!

12/31/24, 5:29 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) No hints or teasers? No promises :p I'll be as vague as possible,... I can see how the outcome of Joe and Lee's latest dunking in the vat of goo might seem like it goes against Hank's intentions. Not just the outcome, but the execution as well,... _strange, isn't it,..._ I wonder why that might be? Now, as for Hank Vs. Super-powers, remember that he had a pretty rough run-in with Nick at the end of the last series. I would feel confident in saying that Hank has never been at a lower point than that and he KNOWS that Nick, Henry and Carl would all have made for some _good boys_ if it weren't for the wild-card factor of their powers! But, maybe listening to Murray's rant has given him something to think about? A little perspective,... _and an idea!_ We'll have to see,...

12/31/24, 7:37 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Then if I were to guess. The most practical reason would be to make them a Trojan horse. To defeat the defense force from within. But even if that were true, it seemed their escape wasn't planned for. So either H-3 will have to adjust on the fly. Or Hank is setting up H-3 for failure. Perhaps even both. Hank is known for his planning. Which would be a clever twist. Either way, it seems like a new generation of crawlers are coming. And I'm very eager to read about those. And speaking of good boys, who will make the first move to claim Carl? Both villains have had a lasting impact on him. He could go either way. Though if Hank wants to start making 'good boys' again, then Carl is a prime candidate to start with. Or maybe Hank will take a renewed interest in Green once he learns that was officer 4. Please remind me, who is Murray? And what rant? I'm truly drawing a black on that. And thumbs up with that scene with yellow. Very hot. If they are going to keep experimenting with the AR on him; how many scenarios will they put him through until he breaks? Very eager for that too. So many guys need to make into good boys.

12/31/24, 9:32 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Murray was the worker that Rick was sic'd on in this chapter, he only mentions his name briefly, but Hank took notice of his rambling. Why? You'll see,...
12/31/24, 8:02 PM
This is such an interesting story, brilliantly written and superbly imaginative, initially it made me very uncomfortable in a Junji Ito-esque way (a good thing, but not usually what I look for in erotica), the main theme of is also not my usual cup of tea, but I've been looking each week hoping a new chapter is up. I love this story so much and cannot wait to see where you take it. For an inanimate story it's breathtakingly, devastatingly, human.
Anonymous
12/31/24, 7:13 PM
Hope this gets continued one day
12/31/24, 6:57 PM
Great start, but I hope Dennis plays a role in this story too.