Recent Comments

7/11/20, 4:08 PM
You've left the door open to continue this story, you've gotten some tips and ideas to do that. I like the story, but it needed more development. I look forward to seeing more of your work. I think you have some good concepts to explore.
7/11/20, 2:19 PM
This has become one of my favorite series and your writing is awesome. Can't wait to see how this ends.
7/11/20, 1:53 PM
wow,great chapter. really cool series
7/11/20, 11:35 AM
okay,this is a twist I didn't see coming but to be honest,Roger and Mike sound like a great thing. It may have been a bit fast but it seems to develop organicly and healthy. I'm glad this isn't taking the fairytale route but that makes it really unpredictable. Probably a good thing though.
7/11/20, 10:03 AM
I really enjoy the idea of Pine doing coach porn in his apartment. AND,I think Leo's got a little crush on Geoff,tbh. Not gonna lie,I have one,too. That guy is just so eager and happy to obey,I really enjoy his scenes. Sad to hear it's almost ending but I'm excited to see if you continue this universe.
7/11/20, 9:11 AM
Awesome to see this update!!!!!! This chapter was great, I didn't expect us to have such a time jump. Mike and Roger are great together and honestly, I don't mind them being together if Roger and Phil can't. The lack of Phil was a painful, but necessary part of their story. Its understandable that Phil would be avoiding him so much but now I'm curious as to how theyre relationship will get resolved. At this point, if hes been this distant and quiet, then I don't know how they can mend their relationship and come out on top. At least Roger will have Mike, which is fine with me. The one thing I'll criticize is how the Roger/Stacy relationship got resolved. I didn't like that Roger was happy about it. I knew he wanted out but I thought he would be more conflicted about it, so I didn't like how he was almost jumping up and down about it. I also didn't like that Roger got off too easy on that. It was too convenient and I wanted HIM to be the one breaking up with her since he at least needed to be honest with her about not being attracted to her anymore. Despite all that, I still like this chapter and the puppy stuff is on point as usual. I cant wait for the grand finale! Lets bring it on and see how this story concludes!
boi98229
7/11/20, 6:58 AM
Nice variety in these vignettes. i like the first two better, probably because they are a little longer with a little more description, and both more plausible. In fact they motivated me to start investigating the status, availability and cost of VR headsets and hypnosis VR videos. However, i almost always look for longer stories. If a story has merit and is worth reading on, i don't want it to end just as i get really interested.
Anonymous
7/11/20, 5:42 AM
You may have copied this over from Tumblr, but you also could have actually read it and attempted to edit it into something readable
7/11/20, 4:43 AM
Now this is my kind of fireworks display! Very well done, can't wait to see what cums next.