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7/10/20, 6:30 AM
Another little gem of writing. The only thing that would make it better is a description of exactly how the odors smell.
May 6, 2019
Anonymous
7/10/20, 6:07 AM
This was honestly a wonderful idea, I think it worked really well. Sure it would have at least been fun to experience Matt's conversion in full as well, then do the whole rinse and repeat, but I can't complain when it is still hot.
Martin
7/10/20, 5:47 AM
Hi, before I approve this, would you like to take a look at the formatting? Especially at the beginning, it's apparent that there are line breaks missing. Please note that for a line break to show up properly, you need to leave an empty line between the paragraphs, otherwise the lines will be joined together. Martin
Anonymous
7/10/20, 5:47 AM
This is one of the best stories I have read, please know it can be a hassle but you should write the same story from Bill's perspective
7/10/20, 5:05 AM
You outdid yourself with the additional double fuck from Dad AND Son! I wanted to be Gallagher and experience the joy and pain of servicing the men. Keep up the great work and make more stories, like the men making babies!
7/10/20, 4:52 AM
Your writing style drew me into each hot, steamy moment between teacher & student! Your words kept me hot, hard & horny. I blew my load at the same time as Danny and it was over the top! Excellent work and keep it up!
Tibbers
7/10/20, 4:51 AM
Just...wow. I couldn't ask for a better gym. Especially a gym that supplies it's own gear (it's expensive). This compares to a similar real life experience for myself when I first started lifting, so this whole story is resonating with me. I'll definitely be on the lookout for future chapters.
7/10/20, 4:46 AM
I totally disagree with the comment about the narrator's voice. I think Willie has captured that kind of "Victorian British Explorer" voice really well. My only problem is I'm not sure when this story is supposed to be happening. Some details (like the 8 hour railway journey) suggest pre-World War I, whereas others suggest a much later decade.
Anonymous
7/10/20, 4:06 AM
would love a sequel
DD
7/10/20, 3:52 AM
Meh, there are multiple ways to finish a story. a hostile take over is short, sweet and to the point. However, a sharing of the mind, maybe body control shenanigans, coupled with a deeper dive into the characters, allowing for development can all lead to a more involved, rewarding story, (with more opportunities for sex and fooling around :).