Recent Comments

DD
7/10/20, 3:52 AM
Meh, there are multiple ways to finish a story. a hostile take over is short, sweet and to the point. However, a sharing of the mind, maybe body control shenanigans, coupled with a deeper dive into the characters, allowing for development can all lead to a more involved, rewarding story, (with more opportunities for sex and fooling around :).
Anonymous
7/10/20, 3:31 AM
Great story!! Love seeing assholes get their due!
Anonymous
7/10/20, 3:30 AM
Great story, as usual!!!
Anonymous
7/10/20, 2:47 AM
I love the ritual and the transforming mud. So hot; leaves me so hard. However, I don't like the protagonist's voice; I don't really believe he's an archaeologist and he's sort of a jerk. I'd love to see you return to the setting or a setting like it with a different voice though
7/10/20, 2:24 AM
It would have been a much hotter story should both of them be merged rather than just a body swap. It's didn't have to be malicious you know? What a let down.
7/9/20, 11:40 PM
Definitely like the second vignette; it would be interesting to see if different slaves gravitate to a specific type and how the master would process that. But that vignette has a lot of potential.
7/9/20, 11:34 PM
Two vampire stories in a row!!! I, like Bush41, enjoyed this story and would like to see what happens to the trio and their master. Please continue their stories once the competition is over.
Martin
7/9/20, 8:50 PM
"pure boy-musk" huh? Fuck, yeah!
Martin
7/9/20, 8:27 PM
Oh I can almost smell that hot teen musk and sweat....
7/9/20, 7:52 PM
Oh man, this hit pretty much all of my buttons. Excellent, excellent work!