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Tibbers
7/10/20, 4:51 AM
Just...wow. I couldn't ask for a better gym. Especially a gym that supplies it's own gear (it's expensive). This compares to a similar real life experience for myself when I first started lifting, so this whole story is resonating with me. I'll definitely be on the lookout for future chapters.
7/10/20, 4:46 AM
I totally disagree with the comment about the narrator's voice. I think Willie has captured that kind of "Victorian British Explorer" voice really well. My only problem is I'm not sure when this story is supposed to be happening. Some details (like the 8 hour railway journey) suggest pre-World War I, whereas others suggest a much later decade.
Anonymous
7/10/20, 4:06 AM
would love a sequel
DD
7/10/20, 3:52 AM
Meh, there are multiple ways to finish a story. a hostile take over is short, sweet and to the point. However, a sharing of the mind, maybe body control shenanigans, coupled with a deeper dive into the characters, allowing for development can all lead to a more involved, rewarding story, (with more opportunities for sex and fooling around :).
Anonymous
7/10/20, 3:31 AM
Great story!! Love seeing assholes get their due!
Anonymous
7/10/20, 3:30 AM
Great story, as usual!!!
Anonymous
7/10/20, 2:47 AM
I love the ritual and the transforming mud. So hot; leaves me so hard. However, I don't like the protagonist's voice; I don't really believe he's an archaeologist and he's sort of a jerk. I'd love to see you return to the setting or a setting like it with a different voice though
7/10/20, 2:24 AM
It would have been a much hotter story should both of them be merged rather than just a body swap. It's didn't have to be malicious you know? What a let down.
7/9/20, 11:40 PM
Definitely like the second vignette; it would be interesting to see if different slaves gravitate to a specific type and how the master would process that. But that vignette has a lot of potential.
7/9/20, 11:34 PM
Two vampire stories in a row!!! I, like Bush41, enjoyed this story and would like to see what happens to the trio and their master. Please continue their stories once the competition is over.