Recent Comments

7/9/20, 11:34 PM
Two vampire stories in a row!!! I, like Bush41, enjoyed this story and would like to see what happens to the trio and their master. Please continue their stories once the competition is over.
Martin
7/9/20, 8:50 PM
"pure boy-musk" huh? Fuck, yeah!
Martin
7/9/20, 8:27 PM
Oh I can almost smell that hot teen musk and sweat....
7/9/20, 7:52 PM
Oh man, this hit pretty much all of my buttons. Excellent, excellent work!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/9/20, 7:05 PM
Hot Dog! Blackmail & humiliation, I really hope somebody does that to me one day!
7/9/20, 6:56 PM
Lee is a complete evil bastard. I love the stories that you wrote for him, but he is a bastard who deserve to reap all the pain he sowed.
7/9/20, 5:57 PM
I really liked the story. It was very creative, and extended in a way that didn't feel drawn out. However, I liked the struggle between Vincent and Jordan, and felt like it would have been interesting to see how that struggle would have continued when all is said and done rather than just saying "okay, you're going to like this now." But it will be interesting to see where this goes.
7/9/20, 4:18 PM
> wish i was a member of this gym > Sigh. Me, too. It's interesting, when looking at the META-arc of all of my stories, you can tell about where I started working out (when muscle-growth was magic or a mysterious substance) to when I started taking "supplements" (stories featuring injections, going too far, extremism), to my present-self, a little older and wiser (stories about rejuvenation and immortality). I really hope that last sentence helps someone with their graduate thesis.
7/9/20, 4:08 PM
Incredibly hot. I love the way the narrator was seduced, the way we could see his desires overcoming all of his scruples. I felt like I was right in his head and body, and I want to fall in the exact same way he did.
Anonymous
7/9/20, 3:54 PM
great story wish i was a member of this gym