Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/9/20, 12:32 PM
Wow, this was insanely well written actually.
7/9/20, 12:19 PM
@evelded I will be. glad you enjoyed it! @ew.sinclair it's the end of Kevin's story but will continue Lee's story in another series. sorry for the cliffhanger ;)
7/9/20, 10:26 AM
I have some ideas for the jocks, I can tell you next chapter
GG
7/9/20, 10:08 AM
I bet that Tony had, via his black master's suggestion, slits placed in all his skin tight uniform pants with well designed and hidden micro zippers. And he was also ordered to wear only jockstraps, thus any black man could have easy and instant access to his cracker boy man twat. 👅
7/9/20, 9:57 AM
Got to admit that this story got by me on the first reading, but on Blufman's recommendation, I went back to it. It is a hot piece of work; nicely detailed and paced.
Jul 5, 2020
7/9/20, 9:35 AM
A cigar is just a cigar, and a piece of fiction is just a piece of fiction. Don't let the turkeys get you down, nolecub. You have talent as a writer. Let's have more from your fertile imagination.
7/9/20, 8:42 AM
this was a lot of fun and it involved different body types without being cringy or mean. I look forward to reading this again and again!
Thom
7/9/20, 7:55 AM
I love dominant straight alpha jocks getting put in their place by seemingly weaker gay guys. Especially when the supposed weaker gay male is the true alpha and makes the once dominant alpha His BITCH, SLUT, WHORE MUSCLED BOTTOM BOY!!! When this is continued, could the writer please bring in jockstraps, Speedos, and our once alpha jock cum faggot queer bottom in tight dress pants, going commando by order of his dom top who slits said pants over his bitch's hole in order to pound his jock-pussy while still fully dressed. 👅👅👅👅👅 Thanks for creating such a H🔥t story!
Anonymous
7/9/20, 6:16 AM
the timeline and shift in narrator confused me and i got lost. i would have like more setup so i was able to grasp what was happening. goos concept tho
7/9/20, 5:51 AM
what?!? it doesnt explain a lot of things about the other series or this one!! dont leave on a cliffhanger dude!