Recent Comments

7/9/20, 9:57 AM
Got to admit that this story got by me on the first reading, but on Blufman's recommendation, I went back to it. It is a hot piece of work; nicely detailed and paced.
Jul 5, 2020
7/9/20, 9:35 AM
A cigar is just a cigar, and a piece of fiction is just a piece of fiction. Don't let the turkeys get you down, nolecub. You have talent as a writer. Let's have more from your fertile imagination.
7/9/20, 8:42 AM
this was a lot of fun and it involved different body types without being cringy or mean. I look forward to reading this again and again!
Thom
7/9/20, 7:55 AM
I love dominant straight alpha jocks getting put in their place by seemingly weaker gay guys. Especially when the supposed weaker gay male is the true alpha and makes the once dominant alpha His BITCH, SLUT, WHORE MUSCLED BOTTOM BOY!!! When this is continued, could the writer please bring in jockstraps, Speedos, and our once alpha jock cum faggot queer bottom in tight dress pants, going commando by order of his dom top who slits said pants over his bitch's hole in order to pound his jock-pussy while still fully dressed. 👅👅👅👅👅 Thanks for creating such a H🔥t story!
Anonymous
7/9/20, 6:16 AM
the timeline and shift in narrator confused me and i got lost. i would have like more setup so i was able to grasp what was happening. goos concept tho
7/9/20, 5:51 AM
what?!? it doesnt explain a lot of things about the other series or this one!! dont leave on a cliffhanger dude!
7/9/20, 2:40 AM
Such wonderful writing! I'm a fan of romance and found this to be a great read.
7/9/20, 2:36 AM
So where is part two already? We need more!!!!
rbbrboy
7/8/20, 11:28 PM
Hey man. It's cool. X