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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/8/20, 8:38 PM
This reading "view" seems a bit awkward to follow. I can see how concept can be applied to other areas such as a statue or perhaps an inflatable doll etc.
7/8/20, 7:58 PM
Loving this. It's great to read a story where it's clear the author knows and loves the gym. My gym isn't open again yet, and even if it was I don't push nearly this much weight, but this story has me itching to go back.
7/8/20, 7:11 PM
Indeed this is a very sweet and heart-warming ending. Not erotic and quite a literal 180 from the ongoing plot, but it nevertheless flowed very smoothly and logically, and was intriguing to follow through. It gave a warm realistic human touch to the otherwise wild fantasy. Good job overall!
7/8/20, 7:11 PM
yeah,I thought it would all fall apart for Sid when he asked to undo all of it,but this is probably the perfect ending they all deserved
Anonymous
7/8/20, 6:43 PM
Funny and cute!
Anonymous
7/8/20, 6:26 PM
Swtiching got a bit confusing towards the end when there were 2? ghosts and multiple different hosts? Good muscle growth descriptions
May 22, 2020
Anonymous
7/8/20, 6:04 PM
Interesting start. At first I thought this was going to be group effort, but apparently you've started this off on your own = looking forward to seeing where it goes.
huckfim
7/8/20, 5:24 PM
I can hardly wait for the next instalment.
Nutiper
7/8/20, 5:15 PM
Just finished reading this one! I do have a soft spot for "Argosy" but I also like romantic stories too. Tbh, there are some stories in general where I look at them more for straight up j/o material, and others where I'm more there for that combined arousal/storytelling pleasure. So, as a reader I've been very happy to read what Wrestlr has been writing! I know that's just me, so I don't mean to speak for everyone here. But I just wanted to add that perspective. I definitely dug this one because of how it felt like one of those 1970/1980s dystopias where it was all about aesthetic, about taking something to its illogical extreme and just running with it -- like Logan's Run, or Mad Max, or even Starship Troopers -- a kinda over-the-top, exaggerated, fever-dream totalitarian world that makes no real sense with daytime-logic, if you look at it too closely; but it is so fun to think about and to experience, as an audience member. And in this case, it started out with that particular aesthetic... and then melted & combined with a Tom of Finland direction as it went on. Which made me realize that the whole Tom of Finland vibe is an equally exaggerated, fever-dream aesthetic... so it was a combo that was both unexpected, but also weirdly so effective? I thought it was really cool, and a lot of fun to read! Also: naming the main character Joe after Joseph K was *chef's kiss*