Recent Comments

Pup Boner
7/8/20, 11:01 AM
I was hanging on every word and my throbbing explosive cock was too. Thank you
Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:00 AM
Amazing story! PS. are the Collelo twins a tribute to Oliverclaudiusdarcy? He wrote some amazing stories :)
7/8/20, 10:42 AM
Wow, this is amazing! Just incredible world-building. It reminds me a lot of 1950s sci fi like Charles Beaumont's "The Crooked Man." I can't wait to read the next parts!
7/8/20, 9:55 AM
I can credit you by putting your name on the title or at the start of the story if you wish.
7/8/20, 7:58 AM
You have some very hot ideas, but you not taking anything out to fruition. Why set the stage only to draw the curtain closed before you've even gotten to the middle, let alone the end. Great ideas and beginnings with your way. We hunger for more development of the characters and frankly- where's the sex? Where's the sweat and hunger, the transformation and the acceptance of the new reality? Keep going. And Love a big man with a cigar, so you already got my attention!!
7/8/20, 6:36 AM
I loved the son-switch and the new brothers relationship too. Can't wait to see Todd and Kyle performing more incest fun. I do agree with Hypnothrill, though. I think the new father-son relationship needs a a bigger impact to see that there's an actual change in the dynamic. It would be so hot if the sons just forgets their father in the next chapter, maybe really take advantage of them as slaves and treat them as lower beings? That would be hot. I also can't wait for the baseball team to join the fun as well. I hope the wait isn't gonna be too long. Please update soon! Really great job on this update, it was a pleasant surprise and I enjoyed every raunchy moment in this chapter, especially the armpits stuff. You did a wonderful job, PupScout!
Martin
7/8/20, 6:35 AM
@ArdanWolfe, why don't you reformat your story for better reading? You can always edit it. To preserve the paragraph breaks, you have to make sure to leave an empty line between the paragraphs. That's different from the formatting in Word (which is why I wouldn't use a word processor but a simple Markdown compatible editor for stories on GSS).
7/8/20, 6:12 AM
Very hot story! Really good use of escalation as the nudity and sex on campus becomes more commonplace.
Jul 5, 2020
7/8/20, 5:25 AM
yea- to anti-smoke comment- pay attention to the tags- move on if you don't like the idea of smoking.... I thought the premise was hot, but it didn't go far enough. Just as the transformation happened there was no more story or action for the reason we're all here- to have a hot time that takes us on a journey. It started well- just needs to continue.
Anonymous
7/8/20, 3:36 AM
I agree with the other reviewers. Well done! Looking forward to part 2.