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Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:42 AM
Sexy. I want to be one of those guys and supply my cum
Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:33 AM
Hopefully this continues. So sexy and hot. Maybe Officer Madison goes home to his four boys and turns them
7/8/20, 11:31 AM
Overall, I really enjoyed this (and at 45,000 words, it's basically a short novel). I just wish it had gone someplace slightly darker, as the dystopian worldbuilding and Kafkaesque scenario in the opening chapters suggested. My favorites of yours are stories like "Argosy" and the "InFiltration" series, which really do have some sinister elements. Recently, you've been writing more romantic stories, which I respect as very polished pieces of writing, but which don't get my rocks off in the same way.
Pup Boner
7/8/20, 11:01 AM
I was hanging on every word and my throbbing explosive cock was too. Thank you
Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:00 AM
Amazing story! PS. are the Collelo twins a tribute to Oliverclaudiusdarcy? He wrote some amazing stories :)
7/8/20, 10:42 AM
Wow, this is amazing! Just incredible world-building. It reminds me a lot of 1950s sci fi like Charles Beaumont's "The Crooked Man." I can't wait to read the next parts!
7/8/20, 9:55 AM
I can credit you by putting your name on the title or at the start of the story if you wish.
7/8/20, 7:58 AM
You have some very hot ideas, but you not taking anything out to fruition. Why set the stage only to draw the curtain closed before you've even gotten to the middle, let alone the end. Great ideas and beginnings with your way. We hunger for more development of the characters and frankly- where's the sex? Where's the sweat and hunger, the transformation and the acceptance of the new reality? Keep going. And Love a big man with a cigar, so you already got my attention!!
7/8/20, 6:36 AM
I loved the son-switch and the new brothers relationship too. Can't wait to see Todd and Kyle performing more incest fun. I do agree with Hypnothrill, though. I think the new father-son relationship needs a a bigger impact to see that there's an actual change in the dynamic. It would be so hot if the sons just forgets their father in the next chapter, maybe really take advantage of them as slaves and treat them as lower beings? That would be hot. I also can't wait for the baseball team to join the fun as well. I hope the wait isn't gonna be too long. Please update soon! Really great job on this update, it was a pleasant surprise and I enjoyed every raunchy moment in this chapter, especially the armpits stuff. You did a wonderful job, PupScout!
Martin
7/8/20, 6:35 AM
@ArdanWolfe, why don't you reformat your story for better reading? You can always edit it. To preserve the paragraph breaks, you have to make sure to leave an empty line between the paragraphs. That's different from the formatting in Word (which is why I wouldn't use a word processor but a simple Markdown compatible editor for stories on GSS).