Recent Comments

7/8/20, 9:18 PM
Nice! I hope you continue with the series.
7/8/20, 9:04 PM
Fantastically hot, the entire induction was phenomenal and extremely seductive. Wouldn't mind seeing more of the Master and his new disciple in the future.
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7/8/20, 8:38 PM
This reading "view" seems a bit awkward to follow. I can see how concept can be applied to other areas such as a statue or perhaps an inflatable doll etc.
7/8/20, 7:58 PM
Loving this. It's great to read a story where it's clear the author knows and loves the gym. My gym isn't open again yet, and even if it was I don't push nearly this much weight, but this story has me itching to go back.
7/8/20, 7:11 PM
Indeed this is a very sweet and heart-warming ending. Not erotic and quite a literal 180 from the ongoing plot, but it nevertheless flowed very smoothly and logically, and was intriguing to follow through. It gave a warm realistic human touch to the otherwise wild fantasy. Good job overall!
7/8/20, 7:11 PM
yeah,I thought it would all fall apart for Sid when he asked to undo all of it,but this is probably the perfect ending they all deserved
Anonymous
7/8/20, 6:43 PM
Funny and cute!
Anonymous
7/8/20, 6:26 PM
Swtiching got a bit confusing towards the end when there were 2? ghosts and multiple different hosts? Good muscle growth descriptions
May 22, 2020
Anonymous
7/8/20, 6:04 PM
Interesting start. At first I thought this was going to be group effort, but apparently you've started this off on your own = looking forward to seeing where it goes.