Recent Comments

Martin
7/8/20, 6:35 AM
@ArdanWolfe, why don't you reformat your story for better reading? You can always edit it. To preserve the paragraph breaks, you have to make sure to leave an empty line between the paragraphs. That's different from the formatting in Word (which is why I wouldn't use a word processor but a simple Markdown compatible editor for stories on GSS).
7/8/20, 6:12 AM
Very hot story! Really good use of escalation as the nudity and sex on campus becomes more commonplace.
Jul 5, 2020
7/8/20, 5:25 AM
yea- to anti-smoke comment- pay attention to the tags- move on if you don't like the idea of smoking.... I thought the premise was hot, but it didn't go far enough. Just as the transformation happened there was no more story or action for the reason we're all here- to have a hot time that takes us on a journey. It started well- just needs to continue.
Anonymous
7/8/20, 3:36 AM
I agree with the other reviewers. Well done! Looking forward to part 2.
7/8/20, 1:20 AM
May not seem it from a vast portion of my own stories, but I'm a sucker for a sweet, happy ending when it's earned, and you definitely earned it here. What a great story that I thoroughly enjoyed from start to finish!
7/8/20, 12:59 AM
Valid...Thanks guys. Lost in translation from using images. Will surely keep that in mind for future. Appreciate the feedback!
7/8/20, 12:25 AM
NICE. Okay, so I really like this ending. I really like Reggie basically undying and coming back to himself. I like how he staid straight. But I especially like the fact that the barista was willing to suck cock and also that our main seemed to have memory of it. (That and a bigger cock.) So yeah, this was a fun nice ending. Honestly, knowing how it ended means I can enjoy it a bit more. I do wonder if maybe he could have gained some special abilities, hehe. Also, as a final note, thumbs up on the pov-controller!
7/8/20, 12:11 AM
Fantastic!
7/7/20, 11:57 PM
LOL...disregard previous comment on Ethan transforming himself. I just started Ch 2. Thank you!
7/7/20, 11:57 PM
That was a very hot and very sweet ending. Very well done, for making it both hot and sweet and giving it that nice ending that tied everything together.