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7/7/20, 8:58 PM
This goes into things I taught in a class a few years ago, so rather than place the explanation here (and to be respectful to Martin who has come to my defense) I'm going to put my explanation of things on the forum in the Supernatural discussion. Please take a look over there (https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/story-challenge-2-supernatural-discussion/1590/16).
7/7/20, 8:58 PM
@Ken, I'm not sure if you're familiar with Nacho's work but he usually ends an installment in "arcs." So while this particular chapter in their lives will end on ch 10, it doesn't mean that their stories are over. At least this was the case in Pine's story. I'm hoping I'm correct in thinking that there will be more after the next chapter. There's still so much potential between Nate and Dave. I wanna see their lives after high school, I wanna see them get married and adopt babies and raise a family together, theres so many possibilities!
Ken
7/7/20, 8:41 PM
WHY does it have to end??? You could continue on for at least another 10, and even more...it IS high school after all....lol BUT, if this ends so quickly, I hope you have some new stuff in the works. LOVE your stories and ideas. They are AMAZING.
Anonymous
7/7/20, 8:40 PM
i loved the son-switch. i think its really hot how master mike makes clear that he's taking away his son as his will... and it was even hotter cause i was also hoping that Todd has a brother and so he did! Please continue this story!
Eclipse
7/7/20, 6:39 PM
Thank you for reading and for the kind words! Hypnothrill, my goal was to joke about them a bit, since each story seems to have them, but we love them for it ^_^
7/7/20, 6:20 PM
Lol that's awesome, what I would give to see those two muscle beasts parading around like that :) I hadn't thought of it but I do suppose coordinating outrageous outfits like that between them would take a lot of grooming. I always imagined a huge hairless muscle beast in a singlet to be the opposite, only decision maybe is what color singlet and boots to wear for the day, no hair to groom no worries about the musk. Check out my story MSCL on here if you havent, has plenty of muscle growth, spandex, and big hairless beasts :)
7/7/20, 4:53 PM
Yeah, this series makes me want to have a sweet, buff puppy jock boyfriend lol. I'm glad Nate finally said the L word and realized how great what he had was. And im also glad that he finally realized the efforts that Dave has been putting in for his approval. I still dont know whats gonna happen with their lives after college. Whether they remain together, or go their separate ways, I'm hoping they at least have a great high school year. And who knows, maybe Nate and Dave can find each other when their older and starting their own careers.
7/7/20, 4:44 PM
> love the description of the mid heavy couple with their shaved heads (and I hope bodies too) and tight wrestling singlets, my favorite look for musclebound jock freaks > They're a real couple. I was in Miami for a few weeks of work, and they inhabited one of the ocean-front gyms there. The first time I saw them, they wore matching candy-cane stripe singlets with heavy leather weight belts -- flexing and prancing, they were on exhibition. Don't get me wrong, they were fucking gorgeous! Built and beautiful, but some of the shit they wore! I can't even imagine how much of their spare time had been spent spent on grooming... Clearly, it stuck with me -- they're background characters in a couple of stories. Glad you like them in this.
7/7/20, 4:15 PM
Loving it! The scene in the locker room was amazing, to image a nerdy boy just having his way with a jock while he's completely unable to notice it! UNF!
7/7/20, 4:06 PM
Hell yeah! Glad strong finally got in a proper work out with Prince. And holy hell is Prince hitting the next level, becoming a pure muscle and sex beast awesome! Can't wait to see what he does with Strong now. Also love the description of the mid heavy couple with their shaved heads (and I hope bodies too) and tight wrestling singlets, my favorite look for musclebound jock freaks :)