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7/7/20, 4:15 PM
Loving it! The scene in the locker room was amazing, to image a nerdy boy just having his way with a jock while he's completely unable to notice it! UNF!
7/7/20, 4:06 PM
Hell yeah! Glad strong finally got in a proper work out with Prince. And holy hell is Prince hitting the next level, becoming a pure muscle and sex beast awesome! Can't wait to see what he does with Strong now. Also love the description of the mid heavy couple with their shaved heads (and I hope bodies too) and tight wrestling singlets, my favorite look for musclebound jock freaks :)
Martin
7/7/20, 3:40 PM
"Paranormal" stories are also covered in the current challenge, so this story is a valid contender. I don't make a difference between Para- and Supernatural. Para means "beyond, past", and that's pretty much the same as "super" in this context. And please stay civil. People have opinions, New Guy in Town has stated his opinion in a civil way, there's no reason to be angry about it or to lash out at him, even if you disagree.
7/7/20, 3:17 PM
Yeah, the son-switch stuff was a really interesting idea that didn't quite work for me. I feel like it either needed to be nicer--maybe the boys could just suddenly believe they had two dads--or meaner, really lingering on the fact that Master Mike has essentially erased a lifelong father-son bond.
7/7/20, 3:06 PM
Loved every bit of this story!!
Anonymous
7/7/20, 2:59 PM
When you google 'supernatural defined', the first entry that appears is from the Oxford Dictionary. It reads "adjective (of a manifestation or event) attributed to some force beyond scientific understanding or the laws of nature. "a supernatural being" It then says 'Similar'. This is the first word that follows: paranormal.
7/7/20, 2:54 PM
I love the rimming material and the general nature of events. That said the change in who is whose son is actually something I found myself super disliking, to a point that I didn't even realize how much such a thing would bother me. So I sort of skipped those paragraphs for the rest of the chapter that was pretty sexy.
7/7/20, 2:51 PM
This chapter, like the entire series, definitely pushes my buttons. I especially liked the conversion of Todd as Master Mike's new son. Thanks for continuing the series.
7/7/20, 2:11 PM
Good story, but I would have liked to see more of Hunter's transformation. But it was a really great story :D
7/7/20, 1:41 PM
I've got no problem with the story, which I thought was a hot and fun bite-size piece of erotica. But I do think the contest needed to provide a clearer definition of what a "Supernatural" story entails. To me, this story falls into the category of "weird fiction," which straddles the line between sci-fi and supernatural fantasy. Some details, like the mountain opening up and men being entranced by incantations in a strange language, are more typical of the supernatural fantasy genre; however, we also get details about the biology of these cum-eating alien parasites, which takes us into the realm of sci-fi.