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7/8/20, 12:25 AM
NICE. Okay, so I really like this ending. I really like Reggie basically undying and coming back to himself. I like how he staid straight. But I especially like the fact that the barista was willing to suck cock and also that our main seemed to have memory of it. (That and a bigger cock.) So yeah, this was a fun nice ending. Honestly, knowing how it ended means I can enjoy it a bit more. I do wonder if maybe he could have gained some special abilities, hehe. Also, as a final note, thumbs up on the pov-controller!
7/8/20, 12:11 AM
Fantastic!
7/7/20, 11:57 PM
LOL...disregard previous comment on Ethan transforming himself. I just started Ch 2. Thank you!
7/7/20, 11:57 PM
That was a very hot and very sweet ending. Very well done, for making it both hot and sweet and giving it that nice ending that tied everything together.
7/7/20, 11:53 PM
Great fucking scene with the president and the hands full of cum. I wish Ethan transformed himself into a muscle Daddy or a bear Daddy, before going to the frat party, hot and irresistable . And to echo the comments above, loved how you got rid of the girls. We need more of that in stories.
rbbrboy
7/7/20, 11:10 PM
Hi. I recognised the title and looked and it seemed very familiar. I wrote this back in 2005 when I should've been working at a job I was progressively loathing day by day. It was originally posted on Rubberzone and then again in Instigator magazine. It was something like 15 years ago, as the line 'I bet that you’d look good as a cock whore' was a nod to the then-recently released Arctic Monkeys' I Bet You Look Good On The Dancefloor. I'm an old man now, and so I'm sufficiently flattered to think you thought it was good enough to re-post, and admire that you don't claim credit for it. As is the nature of the modern internet way, things get re-shared and re-used (and it crops up on the rbbrpigmen tumblr, then I've 'reclaimed' it) but if it gives people pleasure, entertainment and ultimately a hard-on, then all cool. X
7/7/20, 10:21 PM
Very nice; has the air of Dracula in the way the missionary gives into the Master. Very good job.
7/7/20, 9:47 PM
What a really great story :D
7/7/20, 8:58 PM
This goes into things I taught in a class a few years ago, so rather than place the explanation here (and to be respectful to Martin who has come to my defense) I'm going to put my explanation of things on the forum in the Supernatural discussion. Please take a look over there (https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/story-challenge-2-supernatural-discussion/1590/16).
7/7/20, 8:58 PM
@Ken, I'm not sure if you're familiar with Nacho's work but he usually ends an installment in "arcs." So while this particular chapter in their lives will end on ch 10, it doesn't mean that their stories are over. At least this was the case in Pine's story. I'm hoping I'm correct in thinking that there will be more after the next chapter. There's still so much potential between Nate and Dave. I wanna see their lives after high school, I wanna see them get married and adopt babies and raise a family together, theres so many possibilities!