Recent Comments

EntrancedGay92
7/7/20, 1:59 AM
Wouldn't the world be a better place if jerks kept their negative comments to themselves? :D This is a great story!! I genuinely love the premise and I look forward to hopefully seeing a second chapter.
7/7/20, 1:18 AM
Those gym bunnies are gonna be trouble, I just know it. Hope Strong puts them in their place eventually
7/7/20, 12:55 AM
Nice!
7/6/20, 11:27 PM
This is my first time through this story, and I'm loving some of the deconstruction stuff you're doing. The way you describe the medical room... > It was like stepping into another world—or a different part of the fantasy, the clean, clinical part, where the author tries desperately to make the science sound reasonable enough to convince the reader of its authenticity, to help with the willing suspension of disbelief. It's like you're in my head.
Curiously Hard
7/6/20, 11:14 PM
Been over a month, will the next part be coming soon?
7/6/20, 10:57 PM
gaaaaah! This is very awesome! When can we expect part two?
7/6/20, 10:56 PM
Wow! That was hot. I’m with Unruly Dogboy and would love to seen him get (more) comeuppance. He already had a bit of it from his roommate.
Lusty Stallion
7/6/20, 10:43 PM
Hot...and dark...but I was pleased with the resolution. what a rollercoaster man!
7/6/20, 10:39 PM
This is paranormal, not supernatural. Supernatural is centered on the dynamics between heaven and hell with earth as in between the two. Just think about the show that bears that name; even when something like this appears it's revealed that it's actually some spirit or monster using its power. You could give this a twist like Doctor Who did with the "Vampires in Venice" episode, but it would be more a scifi take on the supernatural than a supernatural story.
7/6/20, 9:42 PM
will we see more soon?