Recent Comments

7/7/20, 2:57 AM
@tomozco, is there hope still for an update? Love this series so very much. Especially the piss and the feet stuff
7/7/20, 2:50 AM
my favorite chapter. i read this so many years ago and loved it.
BearBoi
7/7/20, 2:43 AM
When you change speaker in dialogue, you do a paragraph break. It's a little bit unreadable with conversations formatted like this.
Anonymous
7/7/20, 2:30 AM
Did I miss something? Isn't paranormal also supernatural? I loved this story. The unknown controlling all these different people was hot!! Loved it!!!!
7/7/20, 2:21 AM
MSTGay3000, you've always been such a good storyteller. I enjoy all of your stories greatly, but some focus a little too much into the foot fetish thing. This one, however, was terrific all around. Great job.
huckfim
7/7/20, 2:14 AM
Great story. Shame it wasn't me !
EntrancedGay92
7/7/20, 1:59 AM
Wouldn't the world be a better place if jerks kept their negative comments to themselves? :D This is a great story!! I genuinely love the premise and I look forward to hopefully seeing a second chapter.
7/7/20, 1:18 AM
Those gym bunnies are gonna be trouble, I just know it. Hope Strong puts them in their place eventually
7/7/20, 12:55 AM
Nice!
7/6/20, 11:27 PM
This is my first time through this story, and I'm loving some of the deconstruction stuff you're doing. The way you describe the medical room... > It was like stepping into another world—or a different part of the fantasy, the clean, clinical part, where the author tries desperately to make the science sound reasonable enough to convince the reader of its authenticity, to help with the willing suspension of disbelief. It's like you're in my head.