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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/6/20, 1:56 PM
I wish I had gone into teaching now.
7/6/20, 1:34 PM
Dude, what a complete visual! Blew my load a few times while reading it. It was a hot visual ending that beats all others. You have a gift for storytelling and I enjoyed reading the story for what it is, without critique. Men, cum, cocks, cum, balls, cum, ass, cum, muscles, cum, fur, cum, fucking and sucking...all the basics and yet, you weave a story that captures my attention, keeps me involved and won't let me leave until the end. Great job!
7/6/20, 1:15 PM
As I read your stories, I'm pulled into them and feel each experience. They are hot, sexual descriptions that are so vivid that I feel a part of the story. I was hard and leaking throughout Joe's adventure. Any Navy experience? Your hot pic displays a hot body, as well. Keep up the excellent work and share more stories!
Martin
7/6/20, 12:50 PM
What a fantastic, creative, funny and hot story!
EntrancedGay92
7/6/20, 12:41 PM
Thanks for your comments Hypnothrill and ForgottenCradle. I chose not to go down the "straight guy gets converted into a hypno slut" route because, though I love it when it's welll written as in Hypnothrill's stories, it's personally not something I feel I'm good at writing. I cannot think from the perspective of someone who isn't gay and doesn't have a hypnosis fetish because that's not my reality. As for a second chapter, I left it open in case I wanted to revisit the story in the future. Writing follow up stories has been a challenge for me because I find it difficult to merge all the pieces together. But since this was a short chapter, with tightly woven details, it may not be that hard.
7/6/20, 12:13 PM
really good
7/6/20, 12:12 PM
Personally,I like that the narrator already got a hypnosis fetish. Kinda shakes things up,makes it more 'believable' for me. I hope that the last paragraph sets up for a chapter 2
7/6/20, 12:03 PM
Thanks for your thoughts, everyone! It is so encouraging when you take the time to let me know what you thought of the story! and your feedback helps me make better stories as well!
7/6/20, 10:22 AM
> Big stache and shaved head > The Strongman. I'm on my way to your place for some role play...
Nov 6, 2019
Pup Rex
7/6/20, 9:30 AM
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