Recent Comments

7/6/20, 9:07 AM
Ace rep!!! Super interesting story! Good characters!!! Hurrayyyy
Jul 6, 2020
Anonymous
7/6/20, 8:51 AM
Terrific
7/6/20, 7:36 AM
I love it! It's sooo good, can't wait for more, this MC is sooo good
Hot Swimmer
7/6/20, 7:27 AM
This was so hot! I like how the swimmers hypnotized each other by stroking their cocks
7/6/20, 7:06 AM
I think this is a hot story, but I admit I would have liked it even better if the narrator hadn't been a gay guy who already has a hypnosis fetish.
Pup Rex
7/6/20, 6:54 AM
love it!
TheAuthor
7/6/20, 6:13 AM
I really liked the worldbuilding on this one. And the characters are pretty interesting too. Great job.
7/6/20, 4:28 AM
haha thanks everyone for all the comments.
Jul 5, 2020
7/6/20, 4:20 AM
I encourage you to write more. I liked the story, but like most of the comments above I thought it was a bit rushed. If you'd like to talk about ideas, I'd be happy to discuss. Bears and cigars are a favorite of mine. Papa
7/6/20, 4:01 AM
You are a fantastic writer! I can't thank you enough for all the sweat, hard cock, full balls & multiple orgasms....just from reading your stories. I hope you have more in work in the future. Good Luck!