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Hot Swimmer
7/6/20, 7:27 AM
This was so hot! I like how the swimmers hypnotized each other by stroking their cocks
7/6/20, 7:06 AM
I think this is a hot story, but I admit I would have liked it even better if the narrator hadn't been a gay guy who already has a hypnosis fetish.
Pup Rex
7/6/20, 6:54 AM
love it!
TheAuthor
7/6/20, 6:13 AM
I really liked the worldbuilding on this one. And the characters are pretty interesting too. Great job.
7/6/20, 4:28 AM
haha thanks everyone for all the comments.
Jul 5, 2020
7/6/20, 4:20 AM
I encourage you to write more. I liked the story, but like most of the comments above I thought it was a bit rushed. If you'd like to talk about ideas, I'd be happy to discuss. Bears and cigars are a favorite of mine. Papa
7/6/20, 4:01 AM
You are a fantastic writer! I can't thank you enough for all the sweat, hard cock, full balls & multiple orgasms....just from reading your stories. I hope you have more in work in the future. Good Luck!
7/6/20, 3:42 AM
I came multiple times while reading this chapter! You have a HOT way with words that keeps me horned. I don't want the chapters to end and wood enjoy these chapters made into a hot/steamy movie (directors, take note)! I can visualize all of the actions of the coaches and assistant coaches. Even my nipples are hard! Good job!
7/6/20, 3:22 AM
Right from the start you had me hard & leaking. The way you describe the raw sex between the coaches will keep me hard all night. Through your words, I feel like I'm in the shower with the coaches, being art of the action. You are now my favorite author and I want, no need, to read more! Thanks!
7/6/20, 1:42 AM
> I really want to hear all about that. Big stache and shaved head.