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TheAuthor
7/6/20, 6:13 AM
I really liked the worldbuilding on this one. And the characters are pretty interesting too. Great job.
7/6/20, 4:28 AM
haha thanks everyone for all the comments.
Jul 5, 2020
7/6/20, 4:20 AM
I encourage you to write more. I liked the story, but like most of the comments above I thought it was a bit rushed. If you'd like to talk about ideas, I'd be happy to discuss. Bears and cigars are a favorite of mine. Papa
7/6/20, 4:01 AM
You are a fantastic writer! I can't thank you enough for all the sweat, hard cock, full balls & multiple orgasms....just from reading your stories. I hope you have more in work in the future. Good Luck!
7/6/20, 3:42 AM
I came multiple times while reading this chapter! You have a HOT way with words that keeps me horned. I don't want the chapters to end and wood enjoy these chapters made into a hot/steamy movie (directors, take note)! I can visualize all of the actions of the coaches and assistant coaches. Even my nipples are hard! Good job!
7/6/20, 3:22 AM
Right from the start you had me hard & leaking. The way you describe the raw sex between the coaches will keep me hard all night. Through your words, I feel like I'm in the shower with the coaches, being art of the action. You are now my favorite author and I want, no need, to read more! Thanks!
7/6/20, 1:42 AM
> I really want to hear all about that. Big stache and shaved head.
7/5/20, 11:56 PM
Pretty hot story. It’s very very hot and I love where you took it. Small critique: I would have loved to read more about the men Sid fucks. You describe the sex very well but don’t focus on their bodies at all. But a very very minor critique :) Are you continuing? This felt like it could have been an ending, but Sid’s possible concern, finally, about the loss/death of his friend Reggie, hints at a bit more.
7/5/20, 11:24 PM
> that means he started around 195. Fuck, he thinks that’s skinny. > For me, one of the biggest bodybuilding milestones was breaking 200 pounds. That felt like I was in the big boy club. At my largest, I got up to 239, and I liked it, tho the eating was very hard for me. Right now, at 56, I'm at 190-195 -- so lean (my friends call me "veinous") and I consider that a healthy weight for my age. For Rook, tho....
7/5/20, 11:12 PM
Love it. He better make the people in the class forget what the totem can do. This kind of magic always backfires in the end. I hope Matt has a great time (build him up), but I am eager for the fall. Does that make me a bad person?