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Jul 5, 2020
7/5/20, 4:32 PM
To the first commenter, piss off. Tags are there for a reason, dont like it? Move onto the next story. Meanwhile, I just rubbed out a massive load reading this story, smokin a fat cigar. Guess what? It felt good.
Feb 22, 2014
Anonymous
7/5/20, 4:25 PM
How many times can we read the same hypnosis story; "unaware, dumbing down, such a good boy". But you've made this fresh. Very well done!!!
7/5/20, 3:54 PM
Thank you. I was hoping to have Chapter 2 up today, but my work had gotten erased. I'll have the next part up shortly, I hope.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/5/20, 3:22 PM
This is what I call a real tight family bond, quality time together.
Jul 5, 2020
7/5/20, 3:17 PM
It's nice that in fantasy you can smoke without ruining your lungs and maybe getting cancer. Still a massive turn-off for those who have friends and family who are stuck on oxygen and have less than a quarter of a lung left after multiple pneumonia attacks. Freud said a cigar is just a cigar and died from mouth and throat cancer. And now covid19 has come around to make smoking even deadlier. So the hint that the pandemic is behind Brick being let go is a bit jarring. But the whole manliness fetish around cigars and smoking is a very real thing. Fetishes can be pretty off-putting to those who don't share them and it's not a thing I want to shame or judge. I put smoking in the same category as the drunken-ness fetish and the bullying fetish. A connection to a perception of manliness and masculinity. Not a thing that works for me. My life has been such that bullying, abuse, booze, tobacco and the whole false dichotomy between brains and masculinity is not arousing in the least, but it does make some people hard, hot and bothered. For those people this story is going to hit a lot of the good triggers and I hope they enjoy it a lot. This story is written to those fetishes and doesn't get very deep into the well-defined characters' heads. I should have liked to have read more of the turnaround in Brock's head. The whole change in mind and complete erasure of who he was is something that testosterone doesn't do. I can see it being induced by the experiences and training he gets from the new culture he's been dragged and drugged into but it would be a stronger story to see it rather than being told about it.
Anonymous
7/5/20, 3:11 PM
Fuck yes!!! Danny becoming a pain pig.
7/5/20, 2:48 PM
Well done, especially on the surprising plot and plot twist.
7/5/20, 1:07 PM
YES! I waited so long for Andrew to claim his daddy. Worth it
7/5/20, 12:44 PM
I loved this. I loved that you didn't have everybody change into just one body type, and I loved that you kept the roommate relationship at the core of the story. Great stuff!
Anonymous
7/5/20, 11:47 AM
I have a request: age regression