Recent Comments

7/5/20, 2:38 AM
I'm happy to see the positive reaction to this chapter, I was not expecting it. In terms of when I'll upload the last two chapters, chapter 10 should be up no later than th 18th of this month. I'm technically on vacation from work and I write these chapters out usually in a week time, so yeah, 18th of this month should be the finale. And even though I have to re-write the chapters to account for the developments of this chapter, I have set the ending in stone. Finally, I promise that I won't pull a Game of Thrones or Harry Potter and kill a fan favorite.
7/5/20, 1:40 AM
Such an original idea for a story. Thank you for sharing. I always like the idea of tickling as a way of torture in stories.
zac
7/5/20, 1:31 AM
I love all of your work, but Trials will always be my favorite! I'm SO glad you came back to this series, and a very promising start. Looking forward to more filthy debauchery!
7/5/20, 1:07 AM
Love how this story is progressing. Looking forward to part 3!
Anonymous
7/5/20, 12:17 AM
Terrific
DaddyLover
7/5/20, 12:09 AM
I hope my boy Phil has a talk with Roger and realizes that his feelings were not totally fabricated. I hope daddy sees that he's never felt more free with our boy Roger here. I'm also with the commenter above, I'll take whatever happy ending I can take. The two of them don't have to ride off into the sunset for me to be happy. I'll be very content as long as the two of them (plus Mike) get to have their man on man fun from time to time.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 11:39 PM
don't make this a bad ending, please, this is my favorite erotic story I've ever seen, so please...
Anonymous
7/4/20, 11:35 PM
This was the best thing that I've seen on here lately. But then it's my favorite type when a younger guy controls the older, the less powerful over the more, etc.
Nutiper
7/4/20, 11:30 PM
Ah, Craig Hanesworth... Not to be confused with other popular actors such as Craig Ivans, Craig Oak, and Craig Plott~ :P I really enjoyed the way the transformation played out for Craig -- that gullible disregard over what he'd signed up for, and then how he was overwhelmed & taken aback by his new desperate desires. I'm also intrigued to see how the next chapter will play out! I appreciated the foreshadowing that clued us in to the way things are going to break down soon. I'm curious to see what happens if/when Reggie loses control. And it's an effective touch, too, to add that moment with Reggie to the end of the chapter. Aka, making us realize (near the end of the chapter) that there's a plotty arc to all this all along... The pacing of information throughout the chapter was just *very* good, in general. You did a fantastic job with dropping us right into the initial sex scene, and then using that scene to gradually flesh out the backstory and worldbuilding of what had happened in the past couple of months since the previous chapter. Kudos on that!
Nutiper
7/4/20, 11:12 PM
This was very hot, and very cute! Nicely done! Plus I enjoyed how they were both fun characters with developed personalities -- it helped make that the scene where Manny suddenly gets a sex drive especially hot.