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Anonymous
7/4/20, 11:35 PM
This was the best thing that I've seen on here lately. But then it's my favorite type when a younger guy controls the older, the less powerful over the more, etc.
Nutiper
7/4/20, 11:30 PM
Ah, Craig Hanesworth... Not to be confused with other popular actors such as Craig Ivans, Craig Oak, and Craig Plott~ :P I really enjoyed the way the transformation played out for Craig -- that gullible disregard over what he'd signed up for, and then how he was overwhelmed & taken aback by his new desperate desires. I'm also intrigued to see how the next chapter will play out! I appreciated the foreshadowing that clued us in to the way things are going to break down soon. I'm curious to see what happens if/when Reggie loses control. And it's an effective touch, too, to add that moment with Reggie to the end of the chapter. Aka, making us realize (near the end of the chapter) that there's a plotty arc to all this all along... The pacing of information throughout the chapter was just *very* good, in general. You did a fantastic job with dropping us right into the initial sex scene, and then using that scene to gradually flesh out the backstory and worldbuilding of what had happened in the past couple of months since the previous chapter. Kudos on that!
Nutiper
7/4/20, 11:12 PM
This was very hot, and very cute! Nicely done! Plus I enjoyed how they were both fun characters with developed personalities -- it helped make that the scene where Manny suddenly gets a sex drive especially hot.
EJG
7/4/20, 10:23 PM
I enjoyed that. Great stuff. Woulda been great if evryone else but Manny,were unaware and oblivious of the changes and behaviours as the tag says. But thats just me
7/4/20, 10:21 PM
I have just two requests: don't split any couple apart, and please, don't make Matt a full on bad guy, make this just a power trip, which he (mostly) fixes later
Anonymous
7/4/20, 10:20 PM
Amazing story man and hilsrious ending
7/4/20, 10:00 PM
Thanks for the ideas! Maybe I'll do a sequel around Halloween. Something involving gay mind control and a zombie outbreak, perhaps. :) Looking back, it's odd how this story developed, because the end was much darker than I'd anticipated. Originally, it was called "The Bare Ass Project" and it was going to be a comedy about 3 hikers who were cursed by a witch to continually have their clothes disappear at odd times. Then, I went back and rewatched Blair Witch again looking for inspiration and decided to go with a bleaker ending.
7/4/20, 9:50 PM
I love the scenes of the Captain and Doctor momentarily falling under the Cuckoos' control. I can't wait to see what happens next!
screamingmoist
7/4/20, 9:25 PM
Glad you liked it! A bit different than the usual tone, but it's fun to switch it up from the darker stuff every now and then.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 9:16 PM
I'll admit i was really anxious about the whole dog suggestion on the previous chapter, like really, REALLY anxious because I hate the whole "bitch slave on all fours with a chain and a wagging tail, barking" because those roleplays almost feel like a borderline beastiality kind of fantasy that just don't sit well with me. So I'm glad how you handled Michael's enslavement where he's acting more of a puppy's disposition instead of the other kind. Michael was so cute, and it made me all gushy about it when he asked Roger if he was proud of him for working out. It made me love the character instantly compared to how he was when he first got introduced. Now I don't mind this Michael to be part the Phil/Roger dynamic and I'm looking forward to him maybe even be in lots of threesomes with them. As for the Phil/Roger romance, I'm not sure how alone I am in this, but I actually don't mind them not being an "official" couple. I don't care if they never go out on dates, hold hands on the streets or live together. I like how creative they get sneaking from their female partners, running away to lakehouses to have alone time together and having fun times messing with each other. I'm completely satisfied with that, no need to have Phil break up with his wife and become that bland couple with Roger