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Anonymous
7/4/20, 9:16 PM
I'll admit i was really anxious about the whole dog suggestion on the previous chapter, like really, REALLY anxious because I hate the whole "bitch slave on all fours with a chain and a wagging tail, barking" because those roleplays almost feel like a borderline beastiality kind of fantasy that just don't sit well with me. So I'm glad how you handled Michael's enslavement where he's acting more of a puppy's disposition instead of the other kind. Michael was so cute, and it made me all gushy about it when he asked Roger if he was proud of him for working out. It made me love the character instantly compared to how he was when he first got introduced. Now I don't mind this Michael to be part the Phil/Roger dynamic and I'm looking forward to him maybe even be in lots of threesomes with them. As for the Phil/Roger romance, I'm not sure how alone I am in this, but I actually don't mind them not being an "official" couple. I don't care if they never go out on dates, hold hands on the streets or live together. I like how creative they get sneaking from their female partners, running away to lakehouses to have alone time together and having fun times messing with each other. I'm completely satisfied with that, no need to have Phil break up with his wife and become that bland couple with Roger
7/4/20, 9:09 PM
I know, it's just that when there is a dumbing scene, and the person just says "I am way dumber than before" and nothing ever happens to show that it is dumber, make it seems as not that dumber at all. If Drake was doing some studing and after dumbing he looked at his books and don't understand math anymore, that's showing he is really dumber than before.
7/4/20, 9:06 PM
This was brilliant! And erotic gay themes aside, you fixed a lot of the plot issues of the spoofed movie. I live relatively near where Blair Witch was set and filmed, I go hiking in the state parks there and several nearby areas regularly. A couple ideas if you decide to write a sequel, not that it needs one as it stands alone wonderfully well, the real Burkittsville is on one side of the city of Frederick where the Army's Fort Detrick is,where they experiment with biological weapons (defense only they claim), and on the other side of Frederick is the President's retreat Camp David. And on the next mountain is a mostly abandoned amusement park notoriously popular with biker gangs and KKK picnics.
7/4/20, 8:55 PM
This was hot, very very hot. The plot, the characters, the magic, all very very hot. Its a nice sexy story.
7/4/20, 8:38 PM
i love you man, thank you for making him a butler. That's a huge turn on. Another well written story you have here. I can't wait to see how you'll twist this again!
7/4/20, 7:52 PM
Really enjoy the pregnancy and domination and eroticism of this story. I found and read the other chapters on Nifty, and i cannot even begin to tell you how ridiculously hot the Prime Minister Gallagher chapter was. i actually found that more engaging than the other characters like Bronson and Frank, though i am intrigued by the Bronson/Danny pairing. my question is will we see more of the sexy ginger Gallagher and his African lovers? and if so, will it be soon? every time you update I'm looking for them, I'm so invested in that story line 😭
Anonymous
7/4/20, 7:49 PM
I'm very impressed at how realistically you had Phil's reaction. Also kudos for Roger for taking the mature step of actually bringing Phil back to his senses. Now, I'm going to be okay with any other endings that you do between them, but please do not, DO NOT make Roger regress and just put Phil back under when he gets rejected. If Phil decides not to be with him, he should respect that decision and let him go, no matter how much that sucks for them (and for us).
Aug 1, 2018
7/4/20, 7:39 PM
Just reread this story and I love it just as much now as I did then. The idea is just brilliant.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 7:27 PM
Wow, unexpected and a very big change. Kudos for taking a chance there. Don't worry, can please everyone. I think it's great. Can't wait to see where u take this.
Leo
7/4/20, 7:26 PM
Fuck this chapter was so hot!! Thank you for uploading the re-written version. I was leaking pre-cum through just reading this chapter but especially the part where butler Phil was rubbing his master’s feet while being fed by his muscular pup Michael. It remind me of a roman emperor sitting back as he received pleasure from his obedient slaves. That ending was crazy though! I hope Phil is soon put back under. I don’t want Roger to lose his daddy slave.