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7/4/20, 10:21 PM
I have just two requests: don't split any couple apart, and please, don't make Matt a full on bad guy, make this just a power trip, which he (mostly) fixes later
Anonymous
7/4/20, 10:20 PM
Amazing story man and hilsrious ending
7/4/20, 10:00 PM
Thanks for the ideas! Maybe I'll do a sequel around Halloween. Something involving gay mind control and a zombie outbreak, perhaps. :) Looking back, it's odd how this story developed, because the end was much darker than I'd anticipated. Originally, it was called "The Bare Ass Project" and it was going to be a comedy about 3 hikers who were cursed by a witch to continually have their clothes disappear at odd times. Then, I went back and rewatched Blair Witch again looking for inspiration and decided to go with a bleaker ending.
7/4/20, 9:50 PM
I love the scenes of the Captain and Doctor momentarily falling under the Cuckoos' control. I can't wait to see what happens next!
screamingmoist
7/4/20, 9:25 PM
Glad you liked it! A bit different than the usual tone, but it's fun to switch it up from the darker stuff every now and then.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 9:16 PM
I'll admit i was really anxious about the whole dog suggestion on the previous chapter, like really, REALLY anxious because I hate the whole "bitch slave on all fours with a chain and a wagging tail, barking" because those roleplays almost feel like a borderline beastiality kind of fantasy that just don't sit well with me. So I'm glad how you handled Michael's enslavement where he's acting more of a puppy's disposition instead of the other kind. Michael was so cute, and it made me all gushy about it when he asked Roger if he was proud of him for working out. It made me love the character instantly compared to how he was when he first got introduced. Now I don't mind this Michael to be part the Phil/Roger dynamic and I'm looking forward to him maybe even be in lots of threesomes with them. As for the Phil/Roger romance, I'm not sure how alone I am in this, but I actually don't mind them not being an "official" couple. I don't care if they never go out on dates, hold hands on the streets or live together. I like how creative they get sneaking from their female partners, running away to lakehouses to have alone time together and having fun times messing with each other. I'm completely satisfied with that, no need to have Phil break up with his wife and become that bland couple with Roger
7/4/20, 9:09 PM
I know, it's just that when there is a dumbing scene, and the person just says "I am way dumber than before" and nothing ever happens to show that it is dumber, make it seems as not that dumber at all. If Drake was doing some studing and after dumbing he looked at his books and don't understand math anymore, that's showing he is really dumber than before.
7/4/20, 9:06 PM
This was brilliant! And erotic gay themes aside, you fixed a lot of the plot issues of the spoofed movie. I live relatively near where Blair Witch was set and filmed, I go hiking in the state parks there and several nearby areas regularly. A couple ideas if you decide to write a sequel, not that it needs one as it stands alone wonderfully well, the real Burkittsville is on one side of the city of Frederick where the Army's Fort Detrick is,where they experiment with biological weapons (defense only they claim), and on the other side of Frederick is the President's retreat Camp David. And on the next mountain is a mostly abandoned amusement park notoriously popular with biker gangs and KKK picnics.
7/4/20, 8:55 PM
This was hot, very very hot. The plot, the characters, the magic, all very very hot. Its a nice sexy story.
7/4/20, 8:38 PM
i love you man, thank you for making him a butler. That's a huge turn on. Another well written story you have here. I can't wait to see how you'll twist this again!