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DaddyLover
7/5/20, 12:09 AM
I hope my boy Phil has a talk with Roger and realizes that his feelings were not totally fabricated. I hope daddy sees that he's never felt more free with our boy Roger here. I'm also with the commenter above, I'll take whatever happy ending I can take. The two of them don't have to ride off into the sunset for me to be happy. I'll be very content as long as the two of them (plus Mike) get to have their man on man fun from time to time.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 11:39 PM
don't make this a bad ending, please, this is my favorite erotic story I've ever seen, so please...
Anonymous
7/4/20, 11:35 PM
This was the best thing that I've seen on here lately. But then it's my favorite type when a younger guy controls the older, the less powerful over the more, etc.
Nutiper
7/4/20, 11:30 PM
Ah, Craig Hanesworth... Not to be confused with other popular actors such as Craig Ivans, Craig Oak, and Craig Plott~ :P I really enjoyed the way the transformation played out for Craig -- that gullible disregard over what he'd signed up for, and then how he was overwhelmed & taken aback by his new desperate desires. I'm also intrigued to see how the next chapter will play out! I appreciated the foreshadowing that clued us in to the way things are going to break down soon. I'm curious to see what happens if/when Reggie loses control. And it's an effective touch, too, to add that moment with Reggie to the end of the chapter. Aka, making us realize (near the end of the chapter) that there's a plotty arc to all this all along... The pacing of information throughout the chapter was just *very* good, in general. You did a fantastic job with dropping us right into the initial sex scene, and then using that scene to gradually flesh out the backstory and worldbuilding of what had happened in the past couple of months since the previous chapter. Kudos on that!
Nutiper
7/4/20, 11:12 PM
This was very hot, and very cute! Nicely done! Plus I enjoyed how they were both fun characters with developed personalities -- it helped make that the scene where Manny suddenly gets a sex drive especially hot.
EJG
7/4/20, 10:23 PM
I enjoyed that. Great stuff. Woulda been great if evryone else but Manny,were unaware and oblivious of the changes and behaviours as the tag says. But thats just me
7/4/20, 10:21 PM
I have just two requests: don't split any couple apart, and please, don't make Matt a full on bad guy, make this just a power trip, which he (mostly) fixes later
Anonymous
7/4/20, 10:20 PM
Amazing story man and hilsrious ending
7/4/20, 10:00 PM
Thanks for the ideas! Maybe I'll do a sequel around Halloween. Something involving gay mind control and a zombie outbreak, perhaps. :) Looking back, it's odd how this story developed, because the end was much darker than I'd anticipated. Originally, it was called "The Bare Ass Project" and it was going to be a comedy about 3 hikers who were cursed by a witch to continually have their clothes disappear at odd times. Then, I went back and rewatched Blair Witch again looking for inspiration and decided to go with a bleaker ending.
7/4/20, 9:50 PM
I love the scenes of the Captain and Doctor momentarily falling under the Cuckoos' control. I can't wait to see what happens next!