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7/4/20, 9:06 PM
This was brilliant! And erotic gay themes aside, you fixed a lot of the plot issues of the spoofed movie. I live relatively near where Blair Witch was set and filmed, I go hiking in the state parks there and several nearby areas regularly. A couple ideas if you decide to write a sequel, not that it needs one as it stands alone wonderfully well, the real Burkittsville is on one side of the city of Frederick where the Army's Fort Detrick is,where they experiment with biological weapons (defense only they claim), and on the other side of Frederick is the President's retreat Camp David. And on the next mountain is a mostly abandoned amusement park notoriously popular with biker gangs and KKK picnics.
7/4/20, 8:55 PM
This was hot, very very hot. The plot, the characters, the magic, all very very hot. Its a nice sexy story.
7/4/20, 8:38 PM
i love you man, thank you for making him a butler. That's a huge turn on. Another well written story you have here. I can't wait to see how you'll twist this again!
7/4/20, 7:52 PM
Really enjoy the pregnancy and domination and eroticism of this story. I found and read the other chapters on Nifty, and i cannot even begin to tell you how ridiculously hot the Prime Minister Gallagher chapter was. i actually found that more engaging than the other characters like Bronson and Frank, though i am intrigued by the Bronson/Danny pairing. my question is will we see more of the sexy ginger Gallagher and his African lovers? and if so, will it be soon? every time you update I'm looking for them, I'm so invested in that story line 😭
Anonymous
7/4/20, 7:49 PM
I'm very impressed at how realistically you had Phil's reaction. Also kudos for Roger for taking the mature step of actually bringing Phil back to his senses. Now, I'm going to be okay with any other endings that you do between them, but please do not, DO NOT make Roger regress and just put Phil back under when he gets rejected. If Phil decides not to be with him, he should respect that decision and let him go, no matter how much that sucks for them (and for us).
Aug 1, 2018
7/4/20, 7:39 PM
Just reread this story and I love it just as much now as I did then. The idea is just brilliant.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 7:27 PM
Wow, unexpected and a very big change. Kudos for taking a chance there. Don't worry, can please everyone. I think it's great. Can't wait to see where u take this.
Leo
7/4/20, 7:26 PM
Fuck this chapter was so hot!! Thank you for uploading the re-written version. I was leaking pre-cum through just reading this chapter but especially the part where butler Phil was rubbing his master’s feet while being fed by his muscular pup Michael. It remind me of a roman emperor sitting back as he received pleasure from his obedient slaves. That ending was crazy though! I hope Phil is soon put back under. I don’t want Roger to lose his daddy slave.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 7:24 PM
phenomenal
7/4/20, 7:21 PM
Awesome, please, 98 more chapters, and more goat!