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Anonymous
7/4/20, 7:24 PM
phenomenal
7/4/20, 7:21 PM
Awesome, please, 98 more chapters, and more goat!
7/4/20, 7:15 PM
This was a very well done chapter, perhaps my favorite so far! I have mad respect for you for not going towards the fairytale route and making the Roger/Phil romance all dandellions and smooth sailing. I'm glad that Phil instead has inner turmoil about the entire thing and that theyre not jist magically together now. You have quite a lot of work ahead of you to make this work and I can't wait to see how you do it! So if I understood you A/N correctly, theres only two chapters left in this story? Do you have an ETA on when you can have everything finished? This has been a great journey and I cant wait to see the conclusion As always, great job! You are slaying it!
7/4/20, 7:11 PM
okay,first: I did not expect THAT twist ending. While it hurts it's probably the most logical thing to do and I'm anxious to see how this all plays out in the finale. on that note,while it's awesome that you engage with your readers so much that you wanna rewrite some things to please us I think you don't really need to. You already do an awesome job with your stories so we'll stay along for the ride until the end. ANYWAY,great chapter. I'm kinda in love with Mike now so I need to see how it continues ow that you took the triggers of them
7/4/20, 7:10 PM
It's more like a love story now. But yap..... I like it.
7/4/20, 6:35 PM
wow man, your writing is getting good. it is really not what i expected. but man, the story is good. nice work. i really feel your passion in this.
7/4/20, 5:33 PM
> I love the build up plus, the mix of muscle and hypno. > I like that it has a unique deconstructionist kind of thing going on. Strong points out the conventions of a mind-control story even as he falls victim to them -- or at least, HOPES he's falling victim to them. He wants it to be true... until he discovers that it is true -- that kind of thing. It's super-long, even for me. I didn't expect to write a novel when I started -- I wanted to write a little 10-part weekly Summer Serial, a little light beach reading. 26 chapters later... it's a complete unto itself. At 92,000 words, twice as long as POLLINATION: The Series, my other "long" work. All of the gym characters were real bodybuilders that I crushed on at the time. Can you name them all?
7/4/20, 5:24 PM
> I wish I had your command of expressive language > Your stories have gotten me off more than once! I'd say that's command of language.
Anonymous
7/4/20, 5:22 PM
More please,great series!!!!!!!!!!
7/4/20, 5:13 PM
Love how this is going. Hope Rook gets his little bro Strong his own singlet to work out in at the gym, make him obey the the bigger man if he doesn't want to. Can't wait for the next part!