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7/2/20, 11:21 PM
On board, but not in the wheel house.
RGM
7/2/20, 10:46 PM
can't wait for the next chapter. extremely Hot
Jul 2, 2020
Anonymous
7/2/20, 10:30 PM
interesting concept. i enjoy a good eldritch story.
Anonymous
7/2/20, 10:28 PM
pretty good start. interesting characters. looking forward to more.
Lusty Stallion
7/2/20, 10:22 PM
Love it man. great work
7/2/20, 10:15 PM
Well, it was a long time coming but well worth the wait. And now we know how everything began for the drones. I see Brett's back story does provide some space for me to work out how Jake could work with police and make them into the force we see in Drone World. I don't know if that was intentional, but I appreciate that. But a great piece of writing; I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the story.
7/2/20, 10:08 PM
love the story, great chapt but i was wonderin when there was going to b a part 3 since it sounds like the tables r gonna b turned on jeff. very interesting like how it ends on a cliffhanger type ending
7/2/20, 9:40 PM
Please do a sequel to this fantastic horny story I wish I was that young man 👍👍
7/2/20, 9:25 PM
If it's at all plausible, would you be alright with uploading the original chapters after posting the rewritten ones? A sort of alternate ending to see what you had initially? I'm rather curious. However, if you want to only upload one set of chapters, I'd vote for the rewritten ones being uploaded. I find that revision tends to bring out more ideas than the initial set. Really love what you've done here, by the way, with Roger falling in love with Phil even if he's not normally into men and Roger not intending Roger to even be aware of this. Really says something about how Phil's marriage has... not failed, but definitely cooled into something that isn't enviable. I can't help but wonder where things will go from here on, especially with Mike now in on everything. That said, I don't know if Stacy's relationship with Roger will work out. He's been quite dismissive of her in the time she's been gone during a rough time, so I can't help but see her dumping him. Could be wrong, we shall see.
Apr 17, 2020
7/2/20, 9:21 PM
This story is so incredible; I find myself thinking about it all the time. Please write more.