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Anonymous
7/2/20, 10:28 PM
pretty good start. interesting characters. looking forward to more.
Lusty Stallion
7/2/20, 10:22 PM
Love it man. great work
7/2/20, 10:15 PM
Well, it was a long time coming but well worth the wait. And now we know how everything began for the drones. I see Brett's back story does provide some space for me to work out how Jake could work with police and make them into the force we see in Drone World. I don't know if that was intentional, but I appreciate that. But a great piece of writing; I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the story.
7/2/20, 10:08 PM
love the story, great chapt but i was wonderin when there was going to b a part 3 since it sounds like the tables r gonna b turned on jeff. very interesting like how it ends on a cliffhanger type ending
7/2/20, 9:40 PM
Please do a sequel to this fantastic horny story I wish I was that young man 👍👍
7/2/20, 9:25 PM
If it's at all plausible, would you be alright with uploading the original chapters after posting the rewritten ones? A sort of alternate ending to see what you had initially? I'm rather curious. However, if you want to only upload one set of chapters, I'd vote for the rewritten ones being uploaded. I find that revision tends to bring out more ideas than the initial set. Really love what you've done here, by the way, with Roger falling in love with Phil even if he's not normally into men and Roger not intending Roger to even be aware of this. Really says something about how Phil's marriage has... not failed, but definitely cooled into something that isn't enviable. I can't help but wonder where things will go from here on, especially with Mike now in on everything. That said, I don't know if Stacy's relationship with Roger will work out. He's been quite dismissive of her in the time she's been gone during a rough time, so I can't help but see her dumping him. Could be wrong, we shall see.
Apr 17, 2020
7/2/20, 9:21 PM
This story is so incredible; I find myself thinking about it all the time. Please write more.
7/2/20, 7:53 PM
Very interesting and promising start. Though the narrative felt a bit too fast pace and like skipping to the next scene a bit too quickly without having given enough setting for scene and background. Hopefully there will be more descriptions the background and settings of the scenario as the plot unrolls in the next installments. But it's a good story and start overall!
7/2/20, 6:15 PM
Yeah, so I totally reread this and its quite hot, quite quite hot. I like the nature of this world. I like the super-sperm guy, maybe they can be called Primes as an idea, and the idea of a guy coming into his own as such and creating a band, a harem, from out of say his neighbors or a gang or something. hehe (Though this is porn a part of me can't help but want to think on the deeper biological nature of the change. On what leads to pregnancy and how the babies are delivered (not a fan of butt delivery to be honest) and such.)
EJG
7/2/20, 5:58 PM
I DO HOPE THIS IS NOT THE END OF IT.I'm so famished now,i'm to the point of gnawing my own wrist for more. Hope that hint of Chad's redneck dad is even BEFORE He gets changed to be MORE ALPHA?. Maybe we'll get to see the change affect BIG Pietro later, if