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7/2/20, 3:28 PM
I liked this a lot.
7/2/20, 3:23 PM
an excellent story . Will reread many times was that good. looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.
7/2/20, 3:17 PM
This is hot. I like the mix of character pov's, so that is super cool. I also love the rimming. The nature of the world itself is also interesting. I especially like how the carriers aren't generally some sort of super tiny femboi (for all that twinks are hot as well) but rather can be a bit mighty in appearance. So yeah that is cool. Also, unlike what would happen in say a similar situation in the world I figure our teacher going home to tell his husband this won't cause the husband to be like "you were unfaithful to me and so we are going to get a divorce" due to the super nature of the musk. (Though I admit to liking the idea that normal musk someone like him could ignore, but that super-musk, prime musk, is something too much for pretty much any carrier to resist.) But yeah this was hot. So thumbs up on that. :)
7/2/20, 2:53 PM
@Corinthian38 - Hmm, Sergeant O'Connor does seem like someone who would be totally devoted to helping the community in any way he can. And after the punk is done with him, who knows what kinds of ideas he'll come up with.
7/2/20, 2:41 PM
I love the premise. Hot start. I would love to read more.
Anonymous
7/2/20, 2:24 PM
Read it twice. I'm still hard!!!
7/2/20, 1:26 PM
Hot and sweet
7/2/20, 12:52 PM
The dumbing down wasn't very overt, but I like were this is going.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
7/2/20, 12:25 PM
I can not get enough of any dumbing down story, especially jock (prefer football) & permanent. Wish that would happen to me one day. Especially when a helmet is involved, snapped into place & final step happens. Love idea of being made too stupid to remove gear at that point.
Bimarguycnj
7/2/20, 11:53 AM
the best part of this series is watching jeff evolve , and open his eyes . from the first chapter i took it that the contest was rigged . but as series went on always waiting to see by who . i cant wait to see how the success side as well as failure side ends . but would love to see how the cheating is addressed